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Post by Bioshock Infinite WD on Dec 27, 2013 1:51:22 GMT
Alright last question of the night before I post a new chapter tomorrow, who do you think is this man? And what group does he represent? Is he trustworthy?
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Post by Michael7123 on Dec 27, 2013 3:01:57 GMT
I'd like to read this, but the way it's posted infuriates me. Can you post it in paragraph format?
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Post by Bioshock Infinite WD on Dec 27, 2013 3:43:51 GMT
What needs to be fixed?
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Post by Bioshock Infinite WD on Dec 27, 2013 3:54:11 GMT
I can put it in paragraph form, I can, I will post everything in paragraph form tomorrow, and the next chapter also tomorrow. Protip, extra points if you can figure out which comic the vehicle is name after.
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Post by Master Psychic on Dec 27, 2013 22:31:35 GMT
Nice chapter.
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Post by Master Psychic on Dec 27, 2013 23:11:50 GMT
I don't know. Maybe not trustworthy.
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Post by Bioshock Infinite WD on Dec 28, 2013 0:52:24 GMT
Well, you'll find out at a point, also note this is quite sometime before episode 6, by pretty much a year.
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Post by IDEK on Dec 29, 2013 20:35:20 GMT
omid...
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Post by Bioshock Infinite WD on Dec 31, 2013 5:30:03 GMT
I would like to mention I am sorry I did not upload anything today, I was busy watching Breaking Bad, but tomorrow it will return, again sorry for the short delay.
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Post by wakemeup on Dec 31, 2013 8:17:38 GMT
Rewatching the series, huh? I need to that too, but I don;t know when.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 31, 2013 13:16:15 GMT
Fact: It's not Parsec's, it's Parsen's.
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Post by Teacakes on Dec 31, 2013 14:31:24 GMT
Bio.... You really need to sort out your paragraphs man.
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Post by Teacakes on Dec 31, 2013 14:42:13 GMT
Putting gaps between sentences doesn't make it a paragraph.... You need to improve on that as it is really difficult to read, it makes it more of a.. Chore (if that's how you spell the word) if you know what I mean.
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Post by IDEK on Dec 31, 2013 17:21:04 GMT
Putting gaps between sentences doesn't make it a paragraph.... You need to improve on that as it is really difficult to read, it makes it more of a.. Chore (if that's how you spell the word) if you know what I mean. that was spelt correctly.
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Post by Bioshock Infinite WD on Jan 2, 2014 0:08:11 GMT
I am not uploading anything today, I am converting the story into paragraph, I am not good at it clearly, I will upload the full conversion very soon.
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