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Post by wakemeup on Jun 8, 2014 9:33:39 GMT
Nice. I liked the addition of Lee, Ben and Kenny's names. Just one thing, why did they put Tanner on the list? Conner himself told him to leave after it's done and he didn't see anything indicating he died, did he?
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Post by Rock114 on Jun 8, 2014 9:40:11 GMT
Conner is assuming he died like everyone else because of the herd that Jen brought down on the place. There's more than enough reason to think that Tanner is dead, and Conner is just too broken right now to hope for... anything, really. And yeah, I liked putting in Lee, Ben, and Kenny's names too. It says that Christa, Omid, and Clem came by and decided to put up the names of the people they'd lost. This is, like, the third time Conner has unknowingly crossed paths with Clem.
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Post by Rock114 on Jun 9, 2014 15:30:41 GMT
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Post by wakemeup on Jun 9, 2014 15:39:02 GMT
Yay, Roman!
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Post by Rock114 on Jun 9, 2014 15:41:40 GMT
Yep. I wanted this story to lead into Down by the River, so I started this thing with the intention of introducing Roman and Clive at the end. I also thought it'd be cool to see how Conner deals with meeting him. If only Roman had known what Conner was actually thinking...
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Post by Rock114 on Jun 10, 2014 19:37:41 GMT
The Epilogue, Out of the Fire is finally up! Conner's tale wraps up as he and his new group decide on what to do now. First, thanks to everyone who read this story for, well, reading it. I really hope you enjoyed it because I loved writing it. Secondly, can I ask any readers to post their final thoughts or any questions that they may have in this thread? I want to see what people liked or didn't like about this story so I can tweak any future stories I may write.
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Post by wakemeup on Jun 10, 2014 20:55:51 GMT
Final thoughts? Great story overall. I liked the character development, especialy in Farley and Conner, your characters were written pretty well, I actually really cared about some of them.
Now, what I disliked. Well... you know, there was, umm... There were few occasions where I wasn't sure who was saying what, but that was happening rarely. That's about it. Then again, I'm not a good critic.
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Post by Rock114 on Jun 10, 2014 22:50:17 GMT
Thanks Brotato. I'll try and make it clear who's speaking in the future. I know I said that Inferno was my last story for Conner, but there's a certain loose end I want to address in a future, smaller project. Bonus points for guessing what it is.
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Post by wakemeup on Jun 11, 2014 5:07:42 GMT
Tanner?
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Post by Rock114 on Jun 11, 2014 5:26:54 GMT
Yep. It'll probably have to wait until the Season is over though, due to stuff and thaaangs I need to know before writing it.
On the plus side, you got the Bonus Points for getting it right. Now you can buy yourself one whole interweb with them.
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Post by wakemeup on Jun 11, 2014 5:29:30 GMT
Yes, bonus points! My dream became true.
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Post by Rock114 on Jun 11, 2014 5:33:35 GMT
Use them wisely, young one.
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