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Post by Bioshock Infinite WD on Jun 5, 2014 14:35:28 GMT
Your actually rather good at hyping stuff up.
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Post by Rock114 on Jun 5, 2014 16:20:05 GMT
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Post by Master Psychic on Jun 5, 2014 16:21:46 GMT
Left review bro.
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Post by wakemeup on Jun 5, 2014 16:30:25 GMT
Since I forgot my username and password to fanfiction net and I'm too lazy to mkae a new one, I'll post my thoughts here.
I was sad after Farley's death, but Lynch dying was satysfying. Conner lost a large part of his humanity, but at least the days of this bandit group are over. I like how you portrayed the fight. I'm terrible at writing those.
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Post by Rock114 on Jun 5, 2014 16:34:59 GMT
Thanks. I wasn't entirely satisfied with the fight myself, but it turned out well enough I think. And Conner's been descending into darkness for the entire story. Inferno pretty much the story of his fall.
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Post by Rock114 on Jun 6, 2014 16:05:17 GMT
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Post by Bioshock Infinite WD on Jun 6, 2014 18:23:28 GMT
Good to know.
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Post by wakemeup on Jun 6, 2014 19:20:47 GMT
FARLEY, YES!
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Post by Rock114 on Jun 6, 2014 20:06:19 GMT
Yeah, I thought you'd like that part.
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Post by wakemeup on Jun 6, 2014 20:38:16 GMT
Yep, you weren't wrong. You know, Rock, Farley has redeemed himself in my eyes by not killing Conner, so I'm glad he's not dead yet
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Post by Rock114 on Jun 6, 2014 20:54:29 GMT
You have no idea how many iterations of that scene there were, the one where Farley redeems himself by not killing Conner. I think I came up with at least half a dozen different scenarios.
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Post by Rock114 on Jun 7, 2014 17:35:40 GMT
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Post by wakemeup on Jun 7, 2014 17:44:28 GMT
One of my favourite chapters so far. Farley's death was more emotional than almost every death in twd season 2. Except Pete's one, of course. I knew there was a reason for me to like Tanner.
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Post by Rock114 on Jun 7, 2014 17:47:27 GMT
Yeah, Farley's death was pretty much set from the beginning. At first I was going to have him killed by Lynch's bandits when he refused to shoot Conner, and it would be more of a heroic sacrifice thing, but eventually I settled on having Conner kill him to show just how far gone Conner was during his rampage. I like it better this way. I'm glad you liked it though, and I'm also glad that you like Tanner.
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Post by Rock114 on Jun 8, 2014 9:14:41 GMT
It's 4 AM but I'm too worked up to go to sleep, so here's an early Chapter
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