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Post by Rock114 on Oct 5, 2014 17:49:58 GMT
Whose watch was it - Nick's/Pete's? Yeah. The same one from Season 2, that was also in my fics about Nick, Pete, and Luke from a while back. It makes more sense for AJ to have the watch than it does for him to have Kenny's hat, because the watch was from the cabin group. I just wanted something of the cabin group to make it to Wellington with Clem and AJ after they got screwed so hard in Season 2. So I decided on Nick and Pete's watch as I had established Clem as having it at the end of "A Tough Hand."
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Post by wakemeup on Oct 5, 2014 18:46:42 GMT
Really, almost over? I thought there were more chapters left, but cool. Nope, just two more. Man, is it just me, or have we gone a few chapters without a death? I honestly have no idea why I just pointed that out. Surely it couldn't be foreshadowing. And here I was, thinking Tanner will die in the end...
It was a really good story, Rock. I mean not just this one, but the while series of Conner, Farley, Roman and Tanner. It's a shame it doesn't get too many reviews. People don't like stories about OC, and to be fair, OCs are just pretty weak in many fics. I'm not an expert, but I think you've written your characters well, congrats.
Kenny being alive is canon to this story though. I'd hate on it, but that means Clem is safe in Wellington, so it's a good enough pay off.
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Post by Rock114 on Oct 5, 2014 18:57:21 GMT
Nope, just two more. Man, is it just me, or have we gone a few chapters without a death? I honestly have no idea why I just pointed that out. Surely it couldn't be foreshadowing. And here I was, thinking Tanner will die in the end...
It was a really good story, Rock. I mean not just this one, but the while series of Conner, Farley, Roman and Tanner. It's a shame it doesn't get too many reviews. People don't like stories about OC, and to be fair, OCs are just pretty weak in many fics. I'm not an expert, but I think you've written your characters well, congrats.
Kenny being alive is canon to this story though. I'd hate on it, but that means Clem is safe in Wellington, so it's a good enough pay off. Thanks Brotato. But here's something to make Kenny being alive even better: Eddie and Tanner took his place in Wellington. If Lucy and Zack hadn't met Tanner and Eddie, then there would have been room in Wellington for Kenny. So the reason he gets turned away and never gets to see Clem again, and possibly dies out in the wilderness is because of Eddie and Tanner.
And thanks. I'm really glad you enjoyed this story. It means a lot to hear that people like my characters.
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