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Post by Rock114 on Oct 2, 2014 21:51:56 GMT
I don't understand how this story only has like 4 reviews on FF.Net, and 3 of them are from me.. It's probably a combination of it being rated M, which doesn't appear automatically in your rating filter unless you change it yourself, and the continuity lockout. In order to understand what's happening in this story, you have to read both Inferno and Down by the River, which is a shit load of reading. And the fact that the cast is mostly OCs probably contributes to it as well. I don't mind it that much, because I really have enjoyed writing this series, especially Inferno.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 2, 2014 21:52:24 GMT
I don't understand how this story only has like 4 reviews on FF.Net, and 3 of them are from me.. It's probably a combination of it being rated M, which doesn't appear automatically in your rating filter unless you change it yourself, and the continuity lockout. In order to understand what's happening in this story, you have to read both Inferno and Down by the River, which is a shit load of reading. And the fact that the cast is mostly OCs probably contributes to it as well. I don't mind it that much, because I really have enjoyed writing this series, especially Inferno. Well, you'll get a review each chapter from me
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Post by Rock114 on Oct 2, 2014 21:56:47 GMT
It's probably a combination of it being rated M, which doesn't appear automatically in your rating filter unless you change it yourself, and the continuity lockout. In order to understand what's happening in this story, you have to read both Inferno and Down by the River, which is a shit load of reading. And the fact that the cast is mostly OCs probably contributes to it as well. I don't mind it that much, because I really have enjoyed writing this series, especially Inferno. Well, you'll get a review each chapter from me Good Guy Carlos, refusing to lock this fic in the shed.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 2, 2014 22:07:38 GMT
Well, you'll get a review each chapter from me Good Guy Carlos, refusing to lock this fic in the shed. the fuck you say?
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Post by Rock114 on Oct 2, 2014 22:19:51 GMT
Good Guy Carlos, refusing to lock this fic in the shed. the fuck you say? Uh... Good Guy Alvin, leaving Review Juiceboxes for me?
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Post by Rock114 on Oct 3, 2014 19:28:30 GMT
Chapter 9, In DarknessConner's fate is finally revealed to the group, threatening to split them apart as Zack and Eddie attempt to pull Tanner and Lucy back from the edge. Beware all ye who enter here: Long ass Chapter ahead.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 3, 2014 19:38:47 GMT
Dat Bonnie reference tho.
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Post by Rock114 on Oct 3, 2014 19:45:31 GMT
Dat Bonnie reference tho. Yep. Back when she was still a fuckin' junkie.
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Post by wakemeup on Oct 3, 2014 20:09:39 GMT
I liked the Bonnie reference. Maybe she, Mike and arvo will appear at some point and Zack will get some sort of redemption for himself, I dunno. Anyways, great chapter, Rock.
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Post by Rock114 on Oct 3, 2014 20:13:50 GMT
I liked the Bonnie reference. Maybe she, Mike and arvo will appear at some point and Zack will get some sort of redemption for himself, I dunno. Anyways, great chapter, Rock. I won't comment on Mike, Bonnie, or Arvo, but there are a few hints about where the group is going next. One Chapter left, then the Epilogue. We're almost done, peoples.
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Post by wakemeup on Oct 3, 2014 20:16:27 GMT
Really, almost over? I thought there were more chapters left, but cool.
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Post by Rock114 on Oct 3, 2014 20:18:09 GMT
Really, almost over? I thought there were more chapters left, but cool. Nope, just two more. Man, is it just me, or have we gone a few chapters without a death? I honestly have no idea why I just pointed that out. Surely it couldn't be foreshadowing.
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Post by Rock114 on Oct 4, 2014 22:52:12 GMT
Chapter 10, SalvationThe group reaches its destination as Tanner's survivor's guilt threatens to overwhelm him. In case you're confused as to what happened to Allen: Zack is talking about Carver, Troy, Johnny, and Bonnie searching the cabin for clues as to which direction the Cabin Group was going an hour or so after the cabin group left heading North in A House Divided. This obviously didn't happen in the game, or if it did it was offscreen at the beginning of the five day time skip in Episode 2. Lucy, Tommy, and Allen stumbled upon them while this was happening and Allen was shot when the group couldn't tell Carver anything about the people he was looking for. So Lucy and Co. missed the cabin group by about an hour or so.
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Post by Rock114 on Oct 5, 2014 17:36:32 GMT
EpilogueThanks to all of you who read this story, and even bigger thanks to everyone who's read my other stories as well. It's been a long Journey, but we've finally reached its End. If I ever revisit any of these characters, it won't be for a long time. Maybe during Season 3, but for the foreseeable future I'll be leaving them alone.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 5, 2014 17:44:32 GMT
Whose watch was it - Nick's/Pete's?
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