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Post by Deleted on Jun 16, 2014 18:25:43 GMT
Good stuff, man. Followed and favorited. Neat-o burrito. I should probably write chapter 6 soon, so that uploading a chapter daily doesn't catch up with me. Chapter 4 was kinda boring to write (Shel's POV), while Chapter 5 (Becca's POV) was really fun to write. I found it fun to kind of 'get inside' Becca's head and kind of expand on her personality a bit.
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Post by Teacakes on Jun 16, 2014 18:41:13 GMT
I left a review and commented on a little mistake you made.
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Post by Teacakes on Jun 16, 2014 18:43:11 GMT
Good stuff, man. Followed and favorited. Neat-o burrito. I should probably write chapter 6 soon, so that uploading a chapter daily doesn't catch up with me. Chapter 4 was kinda boring to write (Shel's POV), while Chapter 5 (Becca's POV) was really fun to write. I found it fun to kind of 'get inside' Becca's head and kind of expand on her personality a bit. Shel's being boring is understandable. She was a boring character. As for Becca, if you make me not hate her for one chapter where it's her POV, then you'll get a good pat on the shoulder from me *pat pat*
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Post by Deleted on Jun 16, 2014 18:48:27 GMT
Neat-o burrito. I should probably write chapter 6 soon, so that uploading a chapter daily doesn't catch up with me. Chapter 4 was kinda boring to write (Shel's POV), while Chapter 5 (Becca's POV) was really fun to write. I found it fun to kind of 'get inside' Becca's head and kind of expand on her personality a bit. Shel's being boring is understandable. She was a boring character. As for Becca, if you make me not hate her for one chapter where it's her POV, then you'll get a good pat on the shoulder from me *pat pat* Well, I did make her less angry and more jaded. She hasn't undergone a massive personality change, but it just kinda says there's more to her than just being a bitch.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 17, 2014 12:46:26 GMT
In which Wyatt becomes responsible for something. AFAIK, that title is a double reference. It's referencing the achievement in Season 1 where Lee kills the Babysitter, which is referencing the title of a movie.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 18, 2014 10:53:55 GMT
In which Shel is completely uninteresting and everyone else does stuff. Still, more references to In Harm's Way.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 19, 2014 17:33:06 GMT
Chapter 5 - A Game PlanBecca's a pretty interesting character, over the course of this story I'm going to try to make her less annoying/bitchy without changing her character too much. We get a little look at her motives in this chapter.
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Post by Autobot Sonic on Jun 19, 2014 18:16:43 GMT
Interesting, you waiting for Ep. 4 to start the next chapter?
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Post by Deleted on Jun 19, 2014 18:35:09 GMT
Interesting, you waiting for Ep. 4 to start the next chapter? Nah, the 400 days group won't directly interact with Clem's group. As it stands, they're having to deal with what Clem's group has left behind. Let's say that right now this group is about half an hour behind Clem's Group, meaning that Sarita's arm is already gone and everything. I may wait for Episode 4 after I finish the first arc though, which will be at the end of Chapter 7.
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Post by Teacakes on Jun 19, 2014 20:09:20 GMT
I need to catch up. I haven't read chapter 4 or 5 yet, I'll do it now.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 19, 2014 20:15:49 GMT
Just finished writing chapter 7, which is the finale of the first arc. It'd probably equate to an Episode if it were like the game.
So, let's say Episode 1 is Into The Fray, as well as being the overall name of the fic.
Any 3-word-titles you guys could offer for future 'episodes'? A couple floating around my head are 'The Long Haul', 'Nowhere To Hide' and 'The Enemy Within'. Stuff like that, if you have any good names.
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Post by Teacakes on Jun 19, 2014 20:17:01 GMT
I like the names you came up with.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 19, 2014 20:32:31 GMT
I should do some episode slides in the style of my posters. That'd be awesome.
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Post by Teacakes on Jun 19, 2014 20:36:30 GMT
Yeah.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 19, 2014 21:48:49 GMT
Just finished writing chapter 7, which is the finale of the first arc. It'd probably equate to an Episode if it were like the game. So, let's say Episode 1 is Into The Fray, as well as being the overall name of the fic. Any 3-word-titles you guys could offer for future 'episodes'? A couple floating around my head are 'The Long Haul', 'Nowhere To Hide' and 'The Enemy Within'. Stuff like that, if you have any good names. Note to self: Get off your lazy asshole and read this damn fanfiction. Fucking hell, what is wrong with you?
Good names, btw. I would give suggestions but they'd be pretty generic lol
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