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Post by Teacakes on Jun 15, 2014 19:42:37 GMT
So... Outta that image on the first page, which one is Tyler?
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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2014 19:48:14 GMT
So... Outta that image on the first page, which one is Tyler? The one in the tan shirt: He's also present in the roof scene:
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Post by Teacakes on Jun 15, 2014 20:00:56 GMT
Dumb TKA is dumb.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2014 20:02:12 GMT
I could've been really patronising and said "Tyler is the one that isn't Carver, Tavia or Hank" XD
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Post by Teacakes on Jun 15, 2014 20:04:48 GMT
I am dumb.
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Post by Teacakes on Jun 15, 2014 20:16:02 GMT
Anyway, I left a review for chapter 1.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2014 20:20:49 GMT
Anyway, I left a review for chapter 2. You mean chapter one, right? Because it went Prologue -> Chapter 1 Anyway, in regards to your review, shit does hit the fan Chapter 2, and gets worse in Chapter 3.
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Post by Teacakes on Jun 15, 2014 20:29:36 GMT
Goddammit TKA, you fucked up your post you fucking idiot!
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Post by Rock114 on Jun 15, 2014 20:49:49 GMT
Goddammit TKA, you fucked up your post you fucking idiot! Don't worry, you'll get used to it. I'm sure this won't be the last time.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2014 21:02:17 GMT
Considering I've written quite a few chapters so far, I'm aiming for daily releases for the first 'arc' (i.e the Howe's Hardware part of the story).
So chapter 2 will be tomorrow.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 16, 2014 12:19:49 GMT
Chapter 2 - A Major BreakthroughThis is kind of a two part chapter, along with Chapter 3. Usually I'll just rotate POV characters every chapter, but I had a lot to write for Wyatt's POV so I split it into 2 chapters.
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Post by Master Psychic on Jun 16, 2014 12:54:33 GMT
Nice chapter. Keep up the good work.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 16, 2014 15:10:53 GMT
If anyone's wondering where I got the new characters' names from, here is the source:
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Post by Teacakes on Jun 16, 2014 15:23:05 GMT
Nice.
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Post by sos on Jun 16, 2014 17:55:50 GMT
Good stuff, man. Followed and favorited.
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