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Post by wakemeup on Apr 2, 2014 18:57:18 GMT
Still waiting.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 5, 2014 2:15:53 GMT
Potato
After my name was called, I tried to forget about Harp. He wouldn't want me to die because of grief. I grabbed my bag and went.
Several hours later, I was sitting with my back against a tree, which overlooked a cliff and water. A lot of water. There were a couple of corpses nearby, so I kept my ear out. I held my 2x4 with nails towards the end close. It was unfortunately split above the nails, meaning it wouldn't last as long as I hoped. For now, it worked, though. It used duct tape as the handle, keeping me from getting splinters.
Starving, I went through the food rations given to me. I saw a candy bar, and knew that's what I wanted. I broke off about a seventh of it (though it ended up as more like a 5th), and ate it greedily. Then it was followed with some salami. Delicious, delicious salami. I shoved the seventh slice into my mouth, and was satisfied. Tomorrow night would be... Spinach night. That's what I eventually decided, anyways. Good choices were there, so I should save the good ones for later, so I don't end on a bad meal.
A rustle in the bushes reached my ear. I leaped up, swung my pack over one arm, and walked over. Sweat soaked the duct tape. Then a somewhat familiar face popped up from behind a bush, holding a little pistol. No words were said, just bullets. A lot of bullets. Every single one hit me in the chest. As I fell, I remembered the name behind the pain, Sonic. I didn't die immediately, though. No. I laid on the ground, and felt panic as blood reached my face. Sonic looked me over as he reloaded. When he was done, he walked towards the cliff, and put his hands on his knees. He breathed heavy. His thoughts must've sounded something like, Jesus Christ, I just killed someone, because he began to weep.
Then some scarred man stepped out of the bushes that Sonic originated from. He investigated the situation by flipping me over, with Sonic not hearing over his sobs. I tried to play dead, but I couldn't. The panic was too much. He looked over the bullet holes in my shirt, and took special interest in a bullet that I must not have noticed hit my arm. He gently patted my face, and put his index finger to his lips. He slowly walked over to Sonic, and I began to get up. My arm hurt like a motherfucker, now that I noticed it. The scarred man, who I now recognized as Deadwaste, quickly kicked Sonic's ass, and shoved him over the edge of the cliff. Then he turned back to me.
"whered you get the bulletproof vest?"
"It was my weapon."
"oh.what about the 2x4?"
"A hammer, some duct tape, the 2x4, and some nails were in some workshop I found."
"well come on.i got a place i wanna show you." He said, before walking straight back into the bushes.
DEATHS: SONIC
6 DEAD, 22 LEFT TO GO.
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Post by Autobot Sonic on Apr 5, 2014 2:24:59 GMT
Dammit Harp, you made deadwaste spartan kick me off the cliff. It's okay though actually, the writing's getting better.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 5, 2014 2:25:56 GMT
Dammit Harp, you made deadwaste spartan kick me off the cliff. It's okay though actually, the writing's getting better. Heh heh heh...*kicks sonic*
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Post by Rock114 on Apr 5, 2014 2:32:35 GMT
I can't believe I'm still alive... though I've likely just doomed myself by saying that. Still, at least I punched Bio in the dick, so I'll be riding that high until this is over.
And holy crap, has deadwaste been racking up the body count. I'm calling it right now, he's gonna win.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 5, 2014 3:20:45 GMT
I literally only changed the style by including a name in the beginning.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 5, 2014 3:24:36 GMT
Also, that chapter was originally from Sonic's perspective, and he originally died in a much more brutal way.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 5, 2014 3:39:45 GMT
Insane Alpha Beta
As night fell, I walked through the forest. My revolver and extra ammo weighed heavier than I thought it would. Paranoia struck fear deep into my soul. Earlier, I saw a girl. She looked like something straight from a horror flick. A filthy, grimy, and bruised face. Torn clothing. Yellow, broken teeth. It isn't us that is the real villain. It's her. Maybe they sent us here to feed her. Holy shit. Holy shit. I saw her a second time, an hour after the first. She opened her mouth, but no words came out. I imagine she was trying to summon projectile vomit.
I usually am not this afraid, but being set loose in a forest and being told to kill... It might put a guy on edge. I took a deep breath and reminded myself how ridiculous that is. A shaky, yet satisfying laugh escaped my lips. It penetrated the deep silence of the night. I wonder if I was seeing things. Maybe that was that Cat girl or whatever. The one that roomed with IWMT in the cells. Probably. I never got a good look at Cat, and, being on opposite sides of the cells, we didn't talk much.
I realized that, if that was the Cat, then I should be wary, she'd be trying to kill me, too. I really do hope I was seeing things. I think I was just really hungry. That candy bar in my bag... This was the time to use it, so I did. It really filled me up. Looking at the label, it was a protein bar. No wonder it filled me up.
That's when I heard something. It was only a mere two more seconds before a led pipe clocked me. I lost conciousness instantly. Bio beat me 'till there was little more than brains left.
DEATHS: INSANE ALPHA BETA
7 LEFT, 21 LEFT TO GO.
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Post by Rock114 on Apr 5, 2014 3:59:47 GMT
Alpha was cool
RIP, man.
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Post by Michael7123 on Apr 5, 2014 4:18:45 GMT
I just got into this story. Good job Harp!
Also, I really hope you add songs to future chapters.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 5, 2014 7:04:46 GMT
Now, I have my main characters established. So everything from here on out should be much smoother sailing. And if you haven't been established yet, then don't worry. Bio'll probably kill you. Or deadwaste.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 5, 2014 7:14:04 GMT
Also, before making the third part of the day, I decided to show you something. This will be the last song used.
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Post by wakemeup on Apr 5, 2014 7:22:43 GMT
Oh shit, I'm alive. I was sure it was over for me. I love bulletproof vests.
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Post by Teacakes on Apr 5, 2014 7:27:13 GMT
Am I still alive?
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Post by Deleted on Apr 5, 2014 7:31:42 GMT
Go back and look, dude. You were never listed in the death counts, so that means... What?
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