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Post by Master Psychic on Mar 2, 2014 21:09:34 GMT
You know, MP, if you send drafts to me, I could edit them for you. And maybe I could help with the story, too, if you like. Thanks man.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2014 21:09:43 GMT
That's so nice of you, Harp. Is that sarcasm?
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Post by Bioshock Infinite WD on Mar 2, 2014 21:10:17 GMT
I don't think it is.
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Post by IDEK on Mar 2, 2014 21:13:20 GMT
Don't worry, "I" Will deal with it.
get it?
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Post by Master Psychic on Mar 2, 2014 21:15:26 GMT
Don't worry, "I" Will deal with it. get it? Yeah, "I" get it.
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Post by Rock114 on Mar 2, 2014 21:18:12 GMT
Harp, we're cops. Did you actually expect us to be working?
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Post by Teacakes on Mar 2, 2014 21:23:58 GMT
That's so nice of you, Harp. Is that sarcasm? No. What makes you say that?
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2014 21:32:23 GMT
I think I'll edit the first part for you guys, so it makes more sense
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2014 22:00:14 GMT
The next morning, the sun was shining, and the birds chirping. A civilian car stopped in front of the police station. Sheriff Harpadarpa sighed and walked in, ready for a new boring day in the station. In the office section, Harp went to his desk, and looked around. Officers Bioshock Infinite WD, TeamKennyAlways, Rock114, that1guy, Master Psychic, Sheriff Michael, and the intern, Brotato were all there overnight, working on some final papers on some Cuban drug lord who thought of himself as a God, when Mikey's 9mm proved him wrong. Harpa sat at his desk, and saw TKA playing Minecraft on the computer.
"Good morning Harp." TKA tiredly greted Harp.
"What's up? Don't let chief catch you on there, bud," Harpa responded.
"Look, just five more minutes and I will turn off the game." TKA responded. Harp turned to Michael.
"Hey Mike, how are those papers coming?" Harp asked.
"This is why I wish we'd get something a little less lethal, with the same range as a gun." Michael looked at the two stacks of papers with a scared expression.
Harp looked at his other colleagues. Bio and MP were eating donuts, Guy was reading Clockwork Orange, Rock was sleeping on the desk and Brotato was watching something on Youtube. The sheriff sighed. "Is the chief even going to show up?"
"We'll get a case, bud. Just wait." MP responded
"Like what? Catching some new drug dealers? Look at Mikey, this is why I hate those fuckers."
"Everybody, I have some horrible news to share with all of you." Nobody even noticed chief Darth enter. Darth projected his voice, as to reach even the back of the room.
"What is it, chief?" Bio asked.
"Sixty people died yesterday of heart attacks." Darth said, and the dull faces turned confused.
"Sixty?" Mikey asked, not shocked.
Rock broke the silence that followed, "How does this affect us?"
"We found some strange messages next to the dead, that read 'I am Kira.'" Darth caught Harp's attention.
"Ok... What could it be?" Harp asked Darth.
"They're all with the coroner now. They're checking for cyanide, or any other sort of poison. We're thinking it might be Jesus juice." Darth used his prepared response.
"Well... What sort of God is Kira? I mean... I know a little Japanese, that's pretty close to 'Killer.'" MP asked Darth, his face and voice showing extreme suspicion.
"Unfortnately, I don't know the answer, MP."
"So, what are we going to do?" Harpa asked Darth.
"Well, I guess we will go to the coroner." Darth responded.
"Who'll be the one investigating?" Guy asked Darth.
"Harp... Mkey, once you get finished with that paperwork, you can go and get caught up. Brotato, you can go with, to get a taste of some actual police work." Darth responded.
(MP, sorry, but it didn't make sense to immediately bring in this new guy, but that could happen in part three, but we just have to have one little bit at the morgue.)
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Post by IDEK on Mar 2, 2014 22:01:10 GMT
um. Putting in front of every name Officer is a bit redundant.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2014 22:02:24 GMT
Not necessarily. Not all of them are simple officers, so I put officer in front of the ones that are.
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Post by IDEK on Mar 2, 2014 22:03:18 GMT
redundant,
You could've just listed the officers in order nad then the non-officers afterwards. or whatever.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2014 22:05:17 GMT
Alright. I'll change it.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2014 22:14:37 GMT
Done
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Post by Master Psychic on Mar 2, 2014 22:15:26 GMT
Ok, thanks.
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