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Post by Autobot Sonic on Jan 11, 2014 1:47:40 GMT
Well, glad to see people are still enjoying my fanfic! Part 3 will be released sometime tomorrow. Expect more original content in this part!
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Post by Bioshock Infinite WD on Jan 11, 2014 2:01:28 GMT
Keep it up man.
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Post by Autobot Sonic on Jan 12, 2014 3:38:44 GMT
Thanks! Here's Part 3!
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Clem passed a few blocks before stopping to catch a break from running, gasping for air. She decided that she was okay, as no walkers had followed her following the gunshots.
Looks like they still don't recognize me... She thought to herself, as she took a quick glance at her red hoodie covered in blood and guts.
She continued walking until she found the mansion, overrun with walkers. She sighed sadly at the sight of her group's temporary home now overrun with the undead. She noticed that while she couldn't make her way through the mansion, she noticed a small alleyway in between the mansion and another building. She went through the alleyway, and noticed several intestines and blood scattered across the ground. She then piched her nose as she walked through, the stench preventing her to smell anything else.
As she walked, she stopped and noticed a corpse on the ground, it's body ripped in two with entrails seeping out of its body. She took a quick look at the corpse's face, and her eyes popped open when she saw who it was.
It was Ben.
Oh no! Ben...I'm so sorry... Clementine thought to herself as she stared at the remains of the young boy's corpse.
Clementine then vomited on the ground, unable to comprehend how many people died because of her, as well as the grotesque shape his body was in. However, once she took another look at his face, she noticed a bullet hole in his forehead.
At least he didn't feel any pain...But who was around to do it? Clementine thought to herself.
Her next sight answered her question. A couple feet away from his body, was Kenny's hat, with a pool of blood underneath it as well as a gun by it's side.
No...Not Kenny too! She cried internally.
Unable to deal with all of the death she just witnessed. Clem ran out of the alley as fast as she could, tears falling from her shut eyes, holding Kenny's hat in her hand.
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Clementine eventually arrived at the train. She didn't see any walkers there, nor any sight of Omid or Christa.
"Maybe they're inside waiting for me." She said to herself as she walked up to the train.
Once she got to the train. She noticed the back car's door was open. She climbed in, only to find no sight of Omid or Christa. She then walked towards the front of the train, thinking that they might've slept in there where it was safer. However once she entered the car, they were not there either. Her backpack was gone too.
No...this can't be....Lee said they would be here!! She thought to herself.
She was now faced with the unbelievable now; she would have to survive on her own. But how? She was just a little girl. What could she do to survive?
Clementine Fell to the floor of the car on her knees and layed on the cold floor on her side, crying herself to sleep.
"I'm sorry Lee! It's all my fault! I'm Sorry!!! Omid, Christa, Where are you?!?" She cried out as she lied there helplessly on the floor.
My inspiration for the last part:
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Post by o0HeaDShoT0o on Jan 12, 2014 3:54:33 GMT
You're doing very well so far. And that song... smiley-face-crying Man, it fits with the scene and so sad at the same time.
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Post by Michael7123 on Jan 12, 2014 3:57:59 GMT
You killed Kenny! You bastard!
Well, he might be alive... But what is he really without his hat?
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Post by Autobot Sonic on Jan 12, 2014 4:00:44 GMT
You're doing very well so far. And that song... smiley-face-crying Man, it fits with the scene and so sad at the same time. Thanks man, I was originally just gonna have her leave the train and it would've been a lot less emotional. After listening to the song when writing it though, this ending came in my head and I felt like it would be much better that way. Also I would highly recommend rereading the chapter quickly, specifically the part where she finds Ben and Kenny's hat. I'll be editing that for a decision I'm gonna do in a few chapters. You'll find out that reason later...
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Post by Teacakes on Jan 12, 2014 9:04:28 GMT
..... HOW DARE YOU MAKE IT LOOK LIKE KENNY'S DEAD WHEN HE'S NOT!
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Post by Autobot Sonic on Jan 12, 2014 18:12:19 GMT
Part 4!
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Several hours earlier...
"Let's meet out of town! By the train!" Lee said to Omid and Christa, who just passed the sign before it collapsed. "Are you nuts?!" Omid replied in response to Lee's plan. It was practically suicide. "It's the only way, do you hear me?!" Lee shouted back "Yeah, by the train!" Omid replied. "Jesus,we'll be there!" Christa shouted over the building.
Lee then jumped onto the remainder of the sign and onto the streets, heading towards the Marsh House.
"You'll think he'll be okay down there? It's practically suicide!!" Omid said to Christa. "From what I've seen him do in Crawford, I know Lee's a smart guy, he'll think of a way, I know it." She replied. "Well, we'd better start heading back to the train, it's gonna be awhile." Omid said.
Thankfully since they went across the sign first, the rooftops would take them right back to the mansion, where they could get back to the train.
"So how come you never told them?" Omid asked Christa. "Told them what?" Christa replied to him. "You know...the baby?" He blatantly said. Christa sighted after his questioned "I didn't say anything because well...I thought it would be too much of a burden on the group if I told them. I was gonna tell them back at the mansion, but after seeing how bad of a condition your leg was in, I didn't want everyone to have to worry about both the baby and you. Besides, Crawford only just had enough medicine to fix up your leg." She explained. "Well, we don't have to worry about the baby for a couple more months, let's just get back to the train." Omid said as they continued to walk along the rooftops.
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It had been almost an hour since they left the Marsh House when Omid and Christa finally arrived at the train at the bottom of the hill, only to find that there were about 20 walkers roaming around. "Shit! so much for our escape plan." Omid said sadly. "Yeah, like you would even know how to." Christa said with a light chuckle. "Yeah I could! Probably...Kenny didn't really get around to fully explaining it to me." Omid replied. "Well, maybe if we could sneak inside and get into the cockpit and check how much fuel's left, we could wait there until Lee and Clementine came back, the doors are strong enough to hold if any walkers notice us." Christa explained. "Sounds like a plan." Omid replied as they slowly began to walk towards the train. Only the back and right sides of the trains had walkers around them, allowing the two to climb into the cockpit from the front of the train.
Christa opened the front door of the cockpit, letting Omid in before closing it shut. Omid took a look at the dashboard of the train, only to find that the train was out of reserve fuel. He sighed sadly at the sight. "It's no good. Fuel's run out. No way we're making it out of Savannah on this." He explained to Christa. "Dammit. What do we do now?" She asked him. "I say we wait. For we all know Lee and Clementine could still be trying to get out of that city." he replied. "We can't just wait forever, Eventually the walkers will find a way to break through. I'll give them an hour, but if they're not here by then, we go and take our chances on the countryside." She explained. "What?! And just leave them to die in the city?! You're willing to let a little girl fend for herself?" Omid said to Christa. "Omid, you know i care about Clementine as much as you do, but we both know if they're not here in a hour well...you know what happened to them" She said sadly to him. "Fuck...fine." Omid said coldly.
The time passed by, the walkers slowly shambled down the road into Savannah, but there was still no sign of Lee nor Clementine.
"No...it can't be.." Omid said sadly. "I know, but we have to go now, with those walkers gone it will be our perfect chance to get out of the city." Christa replied.
As Christa opened the door and stepped out, she noticed Omid grabbing something from the corner of the car.
"Omid what are you doing? We have to go now!" Christa whispered to him He walked up to her, with Clementine's backpack in his hand. "I just wanted something to remember Clementine. Plus it'd look good on the baby in a a couple of years." Omid said with a light chuckle. Christa smirked at his clever remark as they both stepped out of the train, and started to climb up the hill towards the countryside.
End of Part 4
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Post by Autobot Sonic on Jan 12, 2014 21:42:12 GMT
Just to let you guys know, I'm considering the next part to be the end of chapter 0, but I also have another side story I'm contemplating on adding if you guys want. It will add another 3 or o parts after part 5.
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Post by IDEK on Jan 12, 2014 21:51:48 GMT
okay./
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Post by Autobot Sonic on Jan 12, 2014 21:57:17 GMT
Oh I forgot to mention, I meant I would add it if you guys wanted to, or would you rather just have me end chapter 0 with the next part.
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Post by IDEK on Jan 12, 2014 21:57:34 GMT
I don't mind.
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Post by o0HeaDShoT0o on Jan 12, 2014 22:37:20 GMT
That's all up to you. It's your story; do whatever you think is right.
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Post by Autobot Sonic on Jan 13, 2014 17:30:54 GMT
Part 5! --------------------
Clementine woke up. It looked like she was inside of a large, pitch black room that went on forever.
"Hello?" she said, hoping she was not alone. Unfortunateley, all that came back was the echoes of her question off the walls.
Suddenly, a blinding white light appeared in front of Clementine, causing her to cover her eyes with her arm. The light kept getting brighter and brighter, until it disappeared all of a sudden. Wondering where the light went, Clementine removed her arm from her face, only to see Lee alive and well right in front of her. Clementine was both shocked and excited, she knew for sure that she killed him back at the jewelry store, so how could he still be alive? Was she dreaming? No, it was to livid to be a dream, it had to be real.
"Lee! What are you doing here? I thought I left you in the store." She asked him, or what she thought was him. "So this is what you're gonna do? After everything I taught you, you're just gonna curl into a ball and let the walkers eat you?" Lee said coldly. "It's not my fault! You said Omid and Christa would be here at the train, but now they're gone! How am I supposed to survive by myself?" she replied sadly. Lee sighed "Clem, remember when I said that you were gonna see bad thing out in this world?" he asked her "Yes..." she replied. "And that you would be able to handle it?" "Yes..." she replied again. "Well this is one of those moments. Sure things may seem bad, but I know you've got what it takes to handle it, I know you can" Lee said.
Suddenly, Lee started to fade away from the room, waving goodbye to Clementine as he did.
"No, Lee! Don't leave me again!" she cried as she ran up to him.
But it was too late, Lee had already disappeared, and Clem stood in the middle of the room sadly.
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Clem awoke to light shining in her eyes. It was early morning, maybe around 5 or 6 AM, she couldn't tell exactly. She slowly stood up and ssaw that there were still no walkers around the train.
Good. She thought. That'll give me time to get out of here.
Stepping out of the train, Clementine remembered the dream she had with Lee, and the advice he had given to her. She could handle this, she knew she could. She looked around pondering where to go. She couldn't follow the railroads, fearing that other herds may have heard the train and would be on there way now, so instead she planned on heading north up the hill until she found a place to rest.
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It had been almost 4 hours since she left the train. Feeling tired, Clementine decided to rest on a log next to a broken down car, pondering what her next move should be. As she looked at the ground, she noticed a couple of bullets scattered around her. She picked them up and put them in her pocket. She'd figure out how to put them in her gun later.
She then took a quick glance at the hills in front of her, only to find a horrifying sight, two figures walking on them. One significantly shorter than the other. Clementine was frightened. Could it be bandits? Cannibals? Worse? All of the thoughts drifted in her head as she wondered who they might be as they continued to walk along the hills, not noticing her.
Maybe it's Omid and Christa? She thought to herself. No, it can't be, they'd be long gone by now.
As she was pondering what to do, the two figures stopped walking and looked in Clementine's direction, noticing her.
Oh no... She thought as they slowly approached her.
Thinking of the only way to protect herself, she brought out her gun and slowly approached them with her arms shaking. As they were coming closer and closer to each other, Clementine noticed the shorter one attempt to pull something out from behind him. Thinking it was a gun, Clementine pulled the trigger on the figure, only to hear an empty click emerge from the weapon. Scared, she continued pulling the trigger, only for no bullets to be fired. She then started to run away from the two figures, causing them to chase after her. She almost outran them, until she tripped on the ligand they were able to catch up to her, their faces blocked by the sunlight.
"What's wrong Clem? Did we spook you?" the shorter one said with a light chuckle.
What? How did he know my name? Wait a minute...
"Omid? Christa?" She asked the figures hesitantly. "Yep, who else did you expect?" Omid said as he helped Clementine to her feet, the three of them came together for a hug immediately after "You guys! I was so worried I'd never find you!" she said happily. "We'd thought we'd never find you." Christa replied. "Lee said you'd be at the train. Where did you guys go?" Clementine asked them. "We were there for about an hour waiting for you and Lee to come back. When you didn't, we assumed the worst and left." Christa explained sadly. "Speaking of which, where is he?" Omid asked Clementine.
Clementine didn't respond to his question, she just slowly lowered her head, their final moment together flashing through her mind.
"I killed him." She said sadly. "Oh my god..." Christa said, barely able to comprehend what she had just said. "No way...you shot him?" Omid asked her. "We were trapped in a jewelry store. He helped me kill a walker and get his gun and the keys to the way out. Then he told me to kill him..." Clementine explained.
She immediately started to cry , tears rolling down her face as Omid and Christa comforted her.
"It's okay Clementine. You won't have to do something like that ever again, I promise. The worst is over now." Christa said to her
But little did they know, that the worst...was yet to come....
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END OF CHAPTER 0
NEXT TIME ON THE WALKING DEAD...
"What do you think?" "Omid, you can't be serious"
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"Are you going to hurt me?" "Only if you're stupid."
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"I think that's my caravan your sleeping in." "What's your name?" "Ralph"
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NOT OUR HOME CHAPTER 1: WHERE ARE WE TO HIDE
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Post by Autobot Sonic on Jan 13, 2014 18:26:35 GMT
I decided that I would drop the side story I had planned for Chapter 0; I was gonna have it so that Clementine would explain what she went through and everything, her finding out about Christa's pregnancy, etc. But then I just decided not to and let the 6 month time jump do it for me. For those of you who don't know, I will be incorporating some elements from TKA's Mercy story, but not in the ways you would expect...
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