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Post by Michael7123 on Jan 2, 2014 14:58:49 GMT
Pretty good so far. Killing Christa off instead of Omid is interesting. I wish that you did more with it. Right now, there isn't really looking to be a whole lot of difference between this fanfic and the game itself. I was hoping to see more significant ramifications of this change. Would Omid really have done as well as Christa in protecting Clem and teaching her how to survive? I'd be interested to see more changes resulting from this switch in future chapters. I'd also be interested in an extra chapter that takes place somewhere over the 16 months that kinda shows how a recently widowered Omid would interact with the 9-year-old he still needs to protect. But, yeah, good job so far. And now that I've read and commented on your fanfic, maybe you can go over and check out mine? It's also on fanfiction.net. I'll give Windfall a read later today. As for differences between Christa and Omid, those will definitely show up. Omid did wind up teaching Clementine how to tend a fire, for example. You'll also notice that Clementine is clinging on to her handgun for dear life, whereas it's nowhere to be seen game. Christa might have taken it away from Clementine, Omid made sure she never left it again. More differences might show up in later chapters. Then again, as I've said, this story is not centered around Omid. There's another character that will be a part of the cabin group. I'm not saying who.
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Post by Teacakes on Jan 2, 2014 17:38:39 GMT
.... KENNY?!
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Post by Michael7123 on Jan 2, 2014 17:48:11 GMT
He's gonna be in episode 2 remember? And if he isn't in episode 2, he's gonna be in this story.
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Post by wakemeup on Jan 2, 2014 17:49:09 GMT
God, please not Lilly.
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Post by Teacakes on Jan 2, 2014 17:49:40 GMT
Ok it would have been nice to see him in episode 1 though....
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Post by Michael7123 on Jan 2, 2014 17:50:42 GMT
Ok it would have been nice to see him in episode 1 though.... He already is in the form of a drawing.
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Post by wakemeup on Jan 2, 2014 17:50:50 GMT
Seriously, TKA, there are other characters than Kenny in the game.
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Post by Teacakes on Jan 2, 2014 17:52:06 GMT
Yeah. I know. What's your point?
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Post by wakemeup on Jan 2, 2014 17:53:30 GMT
That you only talk about him all the time. I have no problems with you liking him so much, but it feels like you only care about him, maybe Clem too.
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Post by Teacakes on Jan 2, 2014 17:55:02 GMT
I care about other people.
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Post by Teacakes on Jan 2, 2014 17:57:14 GMT
Ok it would have been nice to see him in episode 1 though.... He already is in the form of a drawing. Oh yeah You recasted me as that picture.
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Post by Michael7123 on Jan 7, 2014 19:07:36 GMT
Working in the next chapter, hopefuly I can finish it today. No promises though.
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Post by Teacakes on Jan 8, 2014 20:56:32 GMT
Well, you didn't finish it today because today is now yesterday and tomorrow is today.
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Post by Michael7123 on Jan 8, 2014 20:58:37 GMT
Well, you didn't finish it today because today is now yesterday and tomorrow is today. I know. I'm working on it.
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Post by Teacakes on Jan 8, 2014 20:59:23 GMT
I was just making a paradox, man. Don't sweat it, take as long as you need.
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