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Post by Hunter1324 on Jun 13, 2015 7:30:44 GMT
Tomorrow is Into the Fray's first anniversary (and the second anniversary for The Last Of Us). Just letting you all know...
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Post by Deleted on Jun 13, 2015 16:01:26 GMT
This chapter develops Freya's personality a bit, and shows her interaction with Sasha.
Maybe you can guess the deeper reason as to why Silas couldn't take Freya to Sanctum.
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Post by Teacakes on Jun 13, 2015 16:17:33 GMT
I really hate Sonja. If she pulls the 'Hector bured Santcum, he stopped us from finding a cure' bullshit then Hector can simply throw it back in her face by saying that they experimented on people. You were never in the right, Sonj. What Santcum did was wrong, and you were never gonna find a cure. That's not how The Walking Dead works.
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Post by Hunter1324 on Jun 13, 2015 16:25:52 GMT
Nice chapter. Nice way to handle Freya's and Sasha first interaction. Good thing that Bennett didn't loose his shit but managed to stop Sonja. Eager to see more. Also Bennet covering Freya's ears so she didn't hear the word-that-only-Bonnie-deserves felt very on character Also reading the last reviews maybe you should put an author note in the next chapter to let everybody know that this DLC thing might be more than 10 episodes long, if you so choose.
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Post by Hunter1324 on Jun 13, 2015 16:27:49 GMT
I really hate Sonja. If she pulls the 'Hector bured Santcum, he stopped us from finding a cure' bullshit then Hector can simply throw it back in her face by saying that they experimented on people. You were never in the right, Sonj. What Santcum did was wrong, and you were never gonna find a cure. That's not how The Walking Dead works. I suspect Sonja is more pissed of by the fact that she was betrayaled and that she lost her home than for Hector screwing up their project to obtain a cure.
I guess she could still used it as an argument against him if they ever get into another conflict, but I somehow doubt it.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2015 13:11:15 GMT
Last chapter for now. I need to write more (I'm only halfway through Ch69).
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Post by Hunter1324 on Jun 15, 2015 14:52:01 GMT
Nice chapter. Really looking forward to find out who knocked on the door.
I liked the way Bennett recalled his encounter with Vince's group and finding out what is his oppinion of the rest of the group.
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Post by Teacakes on Jun 15, 2015 16:28:28 GMT
i really hate Sonja. That is all.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 16, 2015 2:36:39 GMT
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Post by Deleted on Jun 16, 2015 19:25:12 GMT
You're gonna shit your pants at CH69.
Heheh. 69.
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Post by Autobot Sonic on Jun 16, 2015 19:31:21 GMT
You're gonna shit your pants at CH69. Heheh. 69. RUSSELL CONFIRMED
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Post by Teacakes on Jun 16, 2015 20:44:21 GMT
69 HA HAHA HAHAHAHA
HA
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Post by Hunter1324 on Jun 17, 2015 9:57:55 GMT
You're gonna shit your pants at CH69.
Heheh. 69. You went full Job J. there.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 18, 2015 0:30:46 GMT
1/4 of the way through CH10
This might take a while.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 18, 2015 23:53:36 GMT
Fun fact, Sasha was originally going to have glasses. Her model looked better without them.
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