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Post by Autobot Sonic Part II on Apr 11, 2016 22:31:46 GMT
God everyone's getting back into their fanfics and I still haven't gotten back into Not Our Home yet! I like Hunter's advice on how you could continue each character's arc, but in the event you would wanna start over, maybe make another ITF spin-off focusing on the rise of Monroe? Me and Headshot have been thinking of one ourselves that ties into Life is Strange, but a pseudo-canon side story would be something I'd be interested to read.
At this point, if you really want to stop this, just explain what you had in mind for the rest of the series, and then get to work on the Monroe ITF story. If you're gonna do that though, I'd wait until after Ep.3 is out, hell maybe even make an ITF like thing for the Michonne series! Like, what if Norma and Randall were part of Carver's camp instead of Monroe, or what if Sam and Greg's group was part of Luke's group? Those are just some of my ideas anyway.
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Post by jake frost on Jan 2, 2017 20:11:47 GMT
Since I'm never going to finish this and I can barely remember my outline anyway, here's what was gonna happen: - Yeah, Hector did actually die. 100%
- The Nate arc would've picked up again, he wasn't there for that one reason. He was the one who found Russell after he was shot in Season 1 because he's a stalker. I think maybe he looked poorly upon Ivan's group, too.
- Pretty sure Nate would've killed Russell's squeeze, Beth, too.
- After the Nate stuff the group does actually reach Eastland. I think Em and Becca were on guard duty on the walls.
- Bennett, Sasha, Freya & Russell are let in. Becca tells Sonja to fuck off, Sonja is just glad she got Sasha to safety and doesn't really give a shit after the last settlement she was at.
- Annie's also there at some point. She's wearing Wyatt's glasses.
- Freya befriends Annie, Sasha befriends Becca and Natalia.
- Uhhhh stuff ends... hooray happy ending... eastland gets destroyed at some point after idk why...
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Post by sos on Jan 3, 2017 4:15:57 GMT
Well, I thank you for your writings, Jake. They were awesome. I was so hooked at one point I can remember reading the latest chapter while helping my sister move into her college dorm, LoL.
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Post by jake frost on Jan 3, 2017 4:34:41 GMT
Well, I thank you for your writings, Jake. They were awesome. I was so hooked at one point I can remember reading the latest chapter while helping my sister move into her college dorm, LoL. No problemo. Depending on how things go I might have a new project to work on once my Thrones stuff is done. I'm not sure what form it'll take exactly, though.
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Post by Hunter1324 on Jan 3, 2017 10:15:04 GMT
Well whatever it is, I hope you can get on to it.
Best of luck, Jake.
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Post by Autobot Sonic Part II on Jan 3, 2017 20:22:59 GMT
Looking forward to reading it, whether it be Telltale related or not. Good luck to you bud.
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Post by jake frost on Jan 8, 2017 15:55:05 GMT
After buying a cable for £12 and tearing my old hard drive from the clutches of a laptop that won't turn on, I found the remainder of what I had written for the Epilogue chapters: Chapter 13: Brain ("Brain" was probably a working title)Day 1199
“So, Hector's dead. That happened.” Sasha droned.
She was lying on a couch – no matter how hard the group had wanted to keep moving, her aching hand and Freya's cold had slowed them down. They'd had to stop at the closest house so that Sonja could tend to her properly. Her wounds were cauterised now but it didn't exactly improve how she felt. She'd screamed bloody murder as the lighter had been held against her raw flesh.
Freya was asleep again - this time clutching onto Bennett as she sat on his lap, likely due to the fact that she had probably seen Hector die after Bennett had tossed her over his shoulder. That couldn't be good for a growing child's mind.
Then, of course, there was the matter of Russell and Beth. The two newcomers were hard to trust, but they had seemed as eager as the rest to escape the wrath of the mysterious 'Nate'. They'd seized their chance, and apparently wanted to put things right between them and the group, insisting they'd pull their weight and help forge the path to the settlement.
“Hector is dead.” Bennett confirmed.
“No screams, though.” Sonja shrugged. “I didn't hear any. I mean, I didn't like the guy... but if he didn't scream he might not be dead.”
“He was always quiet.” Bennett retorted, raising a finger and then dropping his hand to steady Freya's sleeping form. “But yeah... heard the gurgling. I think they got his throat early on.”
“Jesus.” Russell breathed – one of the first interactions of his little duo. “Man... ah'm... ah'm sorry that happened.” He raised his hand before Sonja could run her mouth off at him. “That Nate guy was crazy, man. I ran into him more than one time, I'unno how he found me, but he had us trapped. Used Beth to threaten me into roping you folks along. I would'a told ya 'bout him, but truth is I was scared.”
“Walkers probably got him.” Sasha groaned. “Like they got Hector. And like that trap got my hand.”
“He said he was sorry!” Beth snapped, then shook her head. “'Scuse me. I didn't mean to yell. I'm sorry too.”
Sasha didn't tell them they were forgiven, instead electing to emit an indecisive groan. “Soo... where are we going, exactly? Hector's dead and he was the only one who knew where we were supposed to go.”
Sonja moaned and closed her eyes, leaning against the wall next to the couch Sasha was lying on. “Shit-”
“Eastland mall.” Bennett breathed. “Hector grabbed my hand and told me before he told me to run. Freya can testify to that.”
“We dunno where that is, man.” Russell shrugged. “Could be any mall in the country.”
“Yeah,” Sasha countered, raising her good arm as she stared at the ceiling, “but we know the general direction Hector was taking us, so we just follow that. Find a map and we're set 'cause it might be marked on there, y'know?” Also realised that in this chapter Russell should have known were Eastland was because he went there in ITF1. This was a first draft. And here are some portraits for characters I guess would have shown up later on?: Annie & Becca (who I previously said were going to appear): Emily (ended up going all Governor, apparently): Lacey (presumably a kid at Eastland): And the long-awaited return of Shepherd (I don't think this was seriously a planned return, probably just a joke):
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Post by Hunter1324 on Jan 8, 2017 17:25:05 GMT
Damn, I didn't realize until now that it has been nearly a year and a half since the last update for Into The Fray... Also, glad to see ma boi Shephard was ok after all that time
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Post by Niccc on Jan 8, 2017 22:39:52 GMT
SHEPAAARD
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Post by sos on Jan 9, 2017 3:14:45 GMT
Lacey woulda been the GOAT
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