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Post by Teacakes on Dec 24, 2013 9:26:44 GMT
Sorry MP but I couldn't help but laugh at how quickly the adaption was sorted out.
Apart from that everything is great.
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Post by Master Psychic on Dec 24, 2013 9:27:13 GMT
I think Doug should have been a little more hesitant about telling Lee Carley's secret. Well, he din't want Lee to think that maybe Carley is some killer or something by being secretive and such so he had to tell him the truth.
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Post by Teacakes on Dec 24, 2013 9:28:56 GMT
I think Doug should have been a little more hesitant about telling Lee Carley's secret. Well, he din't want Lee to think that maybe Carley is some killer or something by being secretive and such so he had to tell him the truth. Alrighty then.
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Post by Master Psychic on Dec 24, 2013 9:29:30 GMT
Sorry MP but I couldn't help but laugh at how quickly the adaption was sorted out. Apart from that everything is great. I wanted to do the adoption part already so then I won't have to worry about it anymore and focus on the story.
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Post by Teacakes on Dec 24, 2013 9:30:09 GMT
Ok, I can deal with that.
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Post by Master Psychic on Dec 24, 2013 9:32:19 GMT
a reasonable freakout. Poor Carley Is Luciel more of a bitch when the Apocalypse actually didn't happen? Yeah, I wanted to make Luciel more of a monster so then the readers will have a reason to hate her more.
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Post by IDEK on Dec 24, 2013 9:34:09 GMT
Yeah, Rather than just being a Jerk that took a chance to blackmail and died the very same episode during the Apocalypse.
...Makes me wonder if some other great follies characters lived in that neighbourhood.
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Post by Master Psychic on Dec 24, 2013 9:37:26 GMT
And for those who want to know, James Camp is Campman. He will appear in this story later.
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Post by Teacakes on Dec 24, 2013 9:38:22 GMT
Dun dun dun
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Post by Master Psychic on Dec 24, 2013 11:05:44 GMT
In the next day, we see Lee dressing up and preparing to leave for UGA. Clementine: Where are you going? Lee: I'm going to UGA. I have to go to work. Clementine: And you're leaving me alone? Lee: Of course not. Kenny and his family are gonna take care of you. Clementine: Ok. Lee and Clementine get out of the house and Lee knocks at Kenny's door. Kenny opens the door. Kenny: Hey Lee. Lee: Hey. Listen Kenny, I'm going to UGA so can you take care of Clem for me? Kenny: Sure. Lee: Ok thanks. Kenny: No problem. Don't worry, she will be ok. Lee: Clem, be nice to Kenny and his family, ok? Clementine: Ok. Lee gets in his car and leaves for work. He arrives at UGA. he enters inside and when he approaches the classroom, he sees two young man fighting about something. Young man 1: Are you kidding me? There's no way she will fall for you! Young man 2: Oh yeah, like she could fall for some asswipe like you! Young man 1: Well, she will never fall in love with a hopeless idiot who screws up everything. Young man 2: Take that back! Young man 1: Make me! Lee: Russell. Ben. Russell and Ben turn around. Russell and Ben: Mr. Everett! Lee: What are you two doing here instead of being in class? Russell: Sorry Mr. Everett, we were just talking about something. Lee: Like what? Ben: About... Lee: About girls, I know. Who is this girl? Russell: Kim Pitcher. Lee: I see. Well boys, fighting against each other won't solve anything. You should wait and see if she will choose one of you. Russell: Ok. Thanks Mr. Everett. Ben: Yeah, thanks. Lee: Ok, now you two should get going. Your teachers will be angry if you don't. Russell and Ben leave and Lee enters in his classroom.
At night, we see Lee getting out of UGA, and he is tired. He gets in his car and drives away. He stops at the WABE studio. For some reason, he is waiting for Carley. Lee: Why am I even here? Am I worried about her or something? I'm sure she can take care of herself and- Carley: LET ME GO YOU SON OF A BITCH! Lee is shocked when he hears Carley's voice. He looks at a alley and sees Carley being attacked by some guy. Carley: I SAID LET ME GO! Man: No chance lady. Give me your money and I'll let you go. Carley: FUCK YOU! Carley kicks the man in the balls. Man: AH! Oh, now you're gonna get it, you bitch! Lee shows up. Lee: Let her go. Man: And who are you? Her husband? Lee: No. I'm the guy who's gonna kick your ass if you don't leave her alone! Man: I would like to see you try. Lee punches man and beats the hell out of him much to Carley's suprise. The man falls on the ground. Man: YOU MOTHERFUCKER! YOU'RE GONNA REGRET THIS! Lee: I'll give you to the count of three. One, two- Man: OK! OK! I'LL LEAVE! Lee: Good. The man runs away. Lee turns to Carley. Lee: Are you ok? Carley: Yeah, I'm ok. Lee: Did he hurt you? Carley: No. But I hurt him. Lee: Yeah, I saw that. Carley: Why did you rescue me? You could of gotten yourself killed. Lee: I thought you needed help. Carley: I din't need any help. Lee: I'm not so sure about that. Anyways, I could give you a ride. You look a bit tired. Carley: Ok. Lee and Carley get in Lee's car and Lee drives away. They arrive at the neighbourhood in front of Carley's house and Carley gets out of the car. Lee: I'm gonna pick up Clementine. Good night Carley. Carley: Lee, wait! Lee: What is it? Carley:... Thanks for helping me. Lee: No problem. I couldn't just stand there and watch you get killed. Carley: You are a gentleman, you know that? Lee: My wife told me that a thounsands of times before we divorced. Carley: Well, I don't want to take more of your time so good night. Lee: Good night. Lee drives away. Carley enters in her house and sits on the couch, thinking about Lee. Carley: He saved me. He risked his life to save me. Maybe Doug is right, I should give men a second chance but what if he is exactly like James and... No, I have to let go of the past and move forward. I can't just go on like this.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 24, 2013 11:23:56 GMT
So... I'm guessing my request is never going to be in there?
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Post by Deleted on Dec 24, 2013 11:27:09 GMT
MP, this is great so far. Loving it.
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Post by Master Psychic on Dec 24, 2013 11:31:13 GMT
So... I'm guessing my request is never going to be in there? Just wait. Your request will happen sooner or later.
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Post by Master Psychic on Dec 24, 2013 11:31:30 GMT
MP, this is great so far. Loving it. Thanks Cany.
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Post by Teacakes on Dec 24, 2013 11:59:37 GMT
But the go fuck yourself option is horrible
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