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Post by Deleted on Dec 27, 2013 17:34:37 GMT
Ok, it was a bit... Soap opra-ish, but honestly, was better than most fan fics.
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Post by wakemeup on Dec 27, 2013 17:35:45 GMT
I liked it, but it was too much focusing on LeexCarley. But with Nate, S2 will be awesome.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 27, 2013 17:39:56 GMT
Needed more Pete. Also, Russel is a lot less awkward than how he was portrayed here.
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Post by IDEK on Dec 27, 2013 17:42:04 GMT
Needed more Pete. Also, Russel is a lot less awkward than how he was portrayed here. PLOT TWIST: Russell was actually Pete!
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Post by Deleted on Dec 27, 2013 17:43:05 GMT
Needed more Pete. Also, Russel is a lot less awkward than how he was portrayed here. PLOT TWIST: Russell was actually Pete! You're a jerk, Gary.
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Post by IDEK on Dec 27, 2013 17:44:03 GMT
PLOT TWIST: Russell was actually Pete! You're a jerk, Gary. Fem-Boy! the Mascot of the boy's dorm!] I messed that quote up didn't i.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 27, 2013 17:45:33 GMT
You're a jerk, Gary. Fem-Boy! the Mascot of the boy's dorm!] I messed that quote up didn't i. GET HIM JIMMY!
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