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Post by Teacakes on Dec 20, 2014 21:57:05 GMT
I'm in this?! I wasn't informed! I didn't know this thread existed! I didn't know this story existed! You didn't? Huh. I thought you did. If you didn't read it, then let me say this beforehand - I like Kenny and I like you, but for the sake of the story, you had a kind of antagonistic role in the beginning. It changes over time when new facts emerge, but you have to know - I don't mean what I wrote about you, so don't take this too personaly, OK? I had a little look at my role as the antagonist and I laughed. A lot.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 20, 2014 21:58:10 GMT
You didn't? Huh. I thought you did. If you didn't read it, then let me say this beforehand - I like Kenny and I like you, but for the sake of the story, you had a kind of antagonistic role in the beginning. It changes over time when new facts emerge, but you have to know - I don't mean what I wrote about you, so don't take this too personaly, OK? I had a little look at my role as the antagonist and I laughed. A lot. At least I made you a widely known warrior. That's something
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Post by Teacakes on Dec 20, 2014 22:03:41 GMT
I had a little look at my role as the antagonist and I laughed. A lot. At least I made you a widely known warrior. That's something I'm so glad I'm Lord of the House of Kennth. Being the antagonist is also kinda fun. I don't really know what's happening as I've skim read chapters and only looked at parts with me in 'em to see how I was portrayed. Rock burned Kenny's portrait
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Post by Deleted on Dec 20, 2014 22:12:58 GMT
At least I made you a widely known warrior. That's something I'm so glad I'm Lord of the House of Kennth. Being the antagonist is also kinda fun. I don't really know what's happening as I've skim read chapters and only looked at parts with me in 'em to see how I was portrayed. Rock burned Kenny's portrait Read however you want, but you'll be missing a lot, since the story is all about secrets being progressively revealed I know about the portrait, but it needed to be done. But don't worry about it. I can promise you that in the final episode you'll get a happy ending... sort of. (It depends on how you will interpret it. I know you'll be VERY happy with how your story will end, but I know for sure I'd be scared shitless if I was in your place )
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Post by Deleted on Dec 20, 2014 22:17:47 GMT
It would be more like split personalities. Jake is all 'business as usual', but Dark Fox would be his evil twin. The problem was, I didn't know where I wanted to go with this plotline, so I decided not to use it. Evil? Why not? We already had a cool insane sorcerer Rock, cool insane knight Crackman, we could've had Jake turn into cool Dark Fox when he was mad. I now kind of regret cutting that out. Maybe even more than the implied sex scene.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 20, 2014 22:25:22 GMT
Think about what could have happened if I went with my original plans and included Bigby,Gren,Woodsman,Jersey,Max Payne,Batman,Ezio Auditore,Sos and Bloody Mary.
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Post by IDEK on Dec 20, 2014 22:25:43 GMT
wait batman?
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Post by Teacakes on Dec 20, 2014 22:35:56 GMT
I'm so glad I'm Lord of the House of Kennth. Being the antagonist is also kinda fun. I don't really know what's happening as I've skim read chapters and only looked at parts with me in 'em to see how I was portrayed. Rock burned Kenny's portrait Read however you want, but you'll be missing a lot, since the story is all about secrets being progressively revealed I know about the portrait, but it needed to be done. But don't worry about it. I can promise you that in the final episode you'll get a happy ending... sort of. (It depends on how you will interpret it. I know you'll be VERY happy with how your story will end, but I know for sure I'd be scared shitless if I was in your place ) You've left me kinda confused.
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Post by sos on Dec 20, 2014 22:38:49 GMT
YOU WERE GOING TO MAKE ME AND MARY OFFICIALLY A THING AND YOU DIDN'T? WHAT!? AS DF SAYS: "Y U NO SOS?"
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Post by Deleted on Dec 20, 2014 22:38:58 GMT
Think about what could have happened if I went with my original plans and included Bigby,Gren,Woodsman,Jersey,Max Payne,Batman,Ezio Auditore,Sos and Bloody Mary. Y u no SOS? Because Fabletown plotline was cut, and he was heavily featured in it. Besides, I don't think that Sos would be VERY happy to read a story in which he fights off Bloody Mary in her unglamoured form and says (the following is an actual part of the first draft of Ep8):"Oh, so that's what you're really like" she swung her fist at him, but he grabbed her by the wrist. "No, no, no, no, no, I'm far worse" said Mary, kicking him in the stomach. SOS stumbled several steps back. "Now, can you please stop fucking around and fight like a man?" SOS was breathing heavily, but it didn't escape him how Mary emphasized the word 'fucking'. To be honest, it woke up something inside of him, and he wasn't sure whether he liked it or not. "Care to make this interesting?" he grinned at her. He lowered his fists and approached her slowly. Mary was taken aback by this. What the hell is he doing? "You know, I was on fire when I saw you. I wanted to smash you into million pieces" said SOS. "But now... I am on fire. But not because of that" Before he could touch her, she disappeared. SOS looked around, confused. And then he saw her, in her glamoured form, again. "So that's what you're into" she said, walking towards him, swaying her hips. Suddenly, her copies started to walk out of every corner of the castle. They all started stripping their clothes and running towards SOS. "Maybe we can do something about it". SOS was ecstatic. They were all running closer, and closer... ...aaaaaaaaaaaaand I think I'll leave the rest on my hard drive. Sorry
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Post by Deleted on Dec 20, 2014 22:39:59 GMT
Read however you want, but you'll be missing a lot, since the story is all about secrets being progressively revealed I know about the portrait, but it needed to be done. But don't worry about it. I can promise you that in the final episode you'll get a happy ending... sort of. (It depends on how you will interpret it. I know you'll be VERY happy with how your story will end, but I know for sure I'd be scared shitless if I was in your place ) You've left me kinda confused. Trust me, everything will be okay
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Post by IDEK on Dec 20, 2014 22:40:08 GMT
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That sounds like erotic fanfiction to me.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 20, 2014 22:42:00 GMT
... That sounds like erotic fanfiction to me. Don't worry, it didn't went THAT FAR. I wouldn't write a scene that graphic that involves a real person.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 20, 2014 22:46:04 GMT
Yeah. Batman and Ezio were supposed to appear in the finale, but it would be too long, and the episode itself will probably the longest from the entire series. Their scenes were replaced by another, shorter one, which you will all definitely recognize from something else.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 20, 2014 22:48:22 GMT
YOU WERE GOING TO MAKE ME AND MARY OFFICIALLY A THING AND YOU DIDN'T? WHAT!? AS DF SAYS: "Y U NO SOS?" I am sorry. I really do. But would you like to read about yourself in a scene like the one several posts above? Because I wasn't sure whether to go with it.
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