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Post by Autobot Sonic on Jan 9, 2014 15:35:07 GMT
Part 1 of chapter 0 will be released sometime today. Vote on the fanfic's name here too; the one with the most votes by the end of the day will be the fanfic's title.
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Post by Teacakes on Jan 9, 2014 15:42:47 GMT
Mercy: Redux
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Post by Master Psychic on Jan 9, 2014 15:45:06 GMT
In The Water sounds much cooler.
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Post by Teacakes on Jan 9, 2014 15:46:11 GMT
I was just kidding. I agree with MP.
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Post by Bioshock Infinite WD on Jan 9, 2014 16:15:30 GMT
I say Life is for the Living, but out the choices I say in the Water.
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Post by That Doom Guy on Jan 9, 2014 16:49:51 GMT
I picked No More Room in Hell. I like the sound of that
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Post by DomeWing333 on Jan 9, 2014 17:53:20 GMT
I like "Not Our Home." The name intrigues me more than "In the Water."
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Post by Michael7123 on Jan 9, 2014 17:55:28 GMT
"Mercy' the reason for living." >_>
Anyways, not our home sounds like a cool title. I can't wait to see what it is about.
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Post by Autobot Sonic on Jan 9, 2014 17:58:50 GMT
So far In the Water is in the lead with 4 votes, Not Our Home in second with 3 votes, and No More Room in Hell in 3rd with one vote. I have also decided to name the other choice "Life is for the Living". If you want to vote for Life is for the Living, select other.
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Post by IDEK on Jan 9, 2014 17:59:10 GMT
I change my Vote to Not Our home!
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Post by DomeWing333 on Jan 9, 2014 18:03:52 GMT
*Sees good title no one voted for* *votes for title and posts reason for vote* *comes back and sees it in second place* ...I have influence.
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Post by wakemeup on Jan 9, 2014 18:09:37 GMT
I think "not our home" is the best one, I like it.
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Post by IDEK on Jan 9, 2014 18:13:32 GMT
TIE!
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Post by Autobot Sonic on Jan 9, 2014 18:47:47 GMT
Neck at neck with Not our Home and In the Water! To commemorate this achievement, you guys get an early snippet of Chapter 0!!!
Chapter 0: What Remains
"You're strong Clem...you can do anything" Lee said weakly to Clementine. "B-but, I'm little..." She said back with tears in her eyes. "It don't mean nothing...You're gonna see some bad stuff out there, but you can do it...I know you can." he replied "My parents...It's so horrible..." Clem said, trying to hold back sobs. "I-I can't imagine sweet pea." "And now you? Please...Don't be one of them. Please don't become a walker.." "There's only one thing you can do...you know that"
Oh did she know. The only problem was she wasn't sure if she could do it herself How could she kill the man she been happy with and lived with for the last three months?
"I don't....I don't know if I can." Clem responded. "You have to shoot me, honey" Lee replied sadly. "Lee, no......." "It's okay Clem....It's okay. All you have to do, is point that gun at me, close your eyes.....and be thankful you'll never have to see me as one of them" Lee explained to Clem. "Okay Lee...I can do it....I..I can." Clem said crying.
I can't do this. Clem thought to herself. But I have to, I won't let turn into one of them....I won't...
"Find Omid...and Christa..." Lee said weakly. "They're waiting over by the train. Do you remember how to get there?" he asked her. "Yes..." Clem said sadly. "Good" Lee said with a smile, trying to cheer her up.
"And also..." But Lee couldn't finsih his sentence, he felt himself getting weaker every second now, at any moment he could die. "What? What is it?" Clem asked, tears rolling down her eyes. "I'll be fine...don't worry about it...I'll miss you" Lee said with his last breath. "Me too..." Clem responded.
Clementine then stood up at Lee as he was slowly dying. She could see in his eyes that he was slowly turning. With whimpers coming out of her throat, she weakly raised her gun to Lee's face, who smiled back at her, and then pulled the trigger.
End of Chapter 0, Part 1
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Post by Teacakes on Jan 9, 2014 19:04:53 GMT
this is awesome so far!
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