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Post by Teacakes on Jan 18, 2019 9:17:38 GMT
Since part 2 of Live to See Tomorrow is taking a while, and after seeing what happens to Louis in episode 3 if you don't save him, I decided to write a short about it, just to give him some love and get rid of the pain. It's just above 2,000 words and is a simple character moment between him and Clementine, as she tries to comfort him. It was a little difficult not writing ANY dialogue for Louis and having to instead rely on my descriptions of his expressions and body language, but I hoped it paid off in the end. There's more stuff I can talk about later once people have read it, if anybody is interested in my process. Anyway, you can find it here; www.fanfiction.net/s/13181826/1/TraumaSynopsis: Captured by Lilly and her group, Clementine - despite being riddled with guilt - attempts to talk to and comfort a broken and distraught Louis, in the hopes of making him feel a little less alone. (Oneshot)
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Post by Teacakes on Jan 18, 2019 11:05:59 GMT
Big thanks to Lyric 💗💜💙 for reading the original version and giving my advice on things to change, as well as for her generous compliments You're always a big help, Lyric!
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