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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2015 22:24:06 GMT
Writing a fanfic about Kenny and his new group after season 1 and before season 2, hopefully it won't suck. Be brutally honest with your criticism, that's the only way I can improve. The first two chapters are pretty short, I'm hoping to make the rest longer. www.fanfiction.net/s/11176498/1/Moving-On
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2015 23:01:57 GMT
I'll give it a read in a bit, putting this here so I remember.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 11, 2015 20:21:10 GMT
I've re-written a lot of chapter 2, I guess I rushed it a bit and there were some things that just weren't right with it. I've rephrased some things, added some more information to some parts, and just made some things make more logical sense. So if you've already read chapter 2, read it again before you read chapter 3(which isn't up yet and probably won't be up tonight)
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Post by Deleted on Apr 11, 2015 22:00:00 GMT
I liked it, the story so far is solid and the writing is fine. And I can totally see Lilly becoming the leader of a bandit group. So yeah, pretty decent so far.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 12, 2015 13:19:01 GMT
Chapter 3's up. It would have been longer, but I felt like I found the perfect point to end it on.
Fun fact, the story is currently roughly 96/97 days into the apocalypse
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Post by Deleted on Apr 19, 2015 12:54:26 GMT
Chapter 4's finally up.This chapter didn't end up being as long as I had been planning. It's about the same length as the others though, so I guess I'll keep making them that length. I don't do it on purpose, they always just turn out around that length. Anyway, I've got chapter 5 all planned out, I'm probably going to make that one a bit longer. Or maybe I'll make my "chapter 5 plans" into 2 chapters, 5 and 6. We'll see.
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