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Post by Deleted on May 17, 2014 22:11:10 GMT
Well here's something to think about. Aside from the pilot of Campman's cruiser (which, I know the pilot wasn't pointed out), all three of the pilots have huge roles in us being on this forum. yeah, that's cool too. That's the main reason the pilots are who they are.
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Post by Deleted on May 17, 2014 22:14:45 GMT
This a pretty great idea for a story, awesome work so far, Harp.
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Post by Deleted on May 17, 2014 22:16:07 GMT
This idea... I forget if it was mine or Bio's, but it was one of ours, back when we were still pals. Bio just never got around to writing it.
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Post by wakemeup on May 17, 2014 22:17:21 GMT
Actually, wasn't it my idea? Either my or Harp's. I'm pretty sure it wasn't Bio's idea.
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Post by IDEK on May 17, 2014 22:19:42 GMT
Bio did intend to make the story but....
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Post by Deleted on May 17, 2014 22:20:09 GMT
Oh. Huh. I remember it being either mine or his. Though we were the only three really on that thread. Kinda like how we were the only three on the BrBa thread.
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Post by wakemeup on May 17, 2014 22:21:05 GMT
Heh, good times.
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Post by Deleted on May 17, 2014 22:28:40 GMT
So how often are you updating this?
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Post by Deleted on May 17, 2014 22:30:24 GMT
I dunno. Haven't made up my mind yet. Probably whenever I feel like it, but mostly daily.
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Post by Bioshock Infinite WD on May 17, 2014 22:44:16 GMT
I think it was a combination of Harp, Brotato, and me, but mostly you two.
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Post by Deleted on May 17, 2014 23:31:43 GMT
CAPTAIN MICHAEL: TRANSCRIPTION/LOG 1
MICHAEL: "Dome, get the engine of the Kestrel ready. Mikon, destroy every one of the computers on board bugged vessels. We have minutes at best."
MIKONREBORN: "Captain, permission to speak freely?"
MICHAEL: "Permission denied, Mikon. Save it for the ship."
(Note: A loud sigh can be heard on the audio log at this point.)
MIKONREBORN: "Understood, sir."
MICHAEL'S LOG #1:
Now, to the uninformed, all stealth cruisers, like cars, have parts that can only be fixed externally, despite common thought. The computers. Of course there are other computers inside the ship, but we are talking about the computers. The espionage computers. The computers are held underneath a hidden external flap. Thankfully, there is no feasible way as of yet to find this sort of thing. Rebels would have to be psychotic to begin doing anything that could harm the computers, such as firing upon the ship, removing all of the linings from the ship, or anything along those lines. The only tricky part was getting out of the atmosphere.
Regardless, I sat by the door, waiting for any signs of entry. This base was built into the oft unused and crime oriented floor. Every "good" city in this planet floated high above said floor, only just below the clouds. Behind me, I heard Mikon's gun firing again and again, followed by some manual destruction with a sledgehammer. Thankfully, only four ships had gone out in the last 12 months. He brought out an ion pistol, and shot the remains. Then he moved onto the other ships. I felt a certain sadness in watching my own ship be defiled, but more important things were happening. Then I heard an unusual noise.
MICHAEL: "Time to move, people!"
MIKONREBORN: "They're here already?"
DOMEWING: "Seems like it. Hop in!"
MICHAEL'S LOG #1 (continued):
The door of the Kestrel was open. Mikon wasn't far away, so he hopped in, easily. I, on the other hand, was far, far away. This base was about the size of two football fields. The door was on one end, the ships, on the complete opposite.
MICHAEL: "Dome! Start up the ship! Give me some help!"
(radio) DOMEWING: "Yes, sir."
MICHAEL'S LOG #1 (continued)
The impulse engines fired up, and the ship's landing gear retracted, leaving it floating in the air. The door was still wide open when the rebel troops burst in. Projectiles flew past me, as though I were the fine specimen that each hunter wished to have the head of on their wall. Lucky me. Let it be stated that after this day, I never hunted again.
Dome turned the ship so that the front was facing us, and it opened fire with the burst lasers. This quickly reminded me why Mikon was brought into the federation. Almost every soldier was strewn to the side with limbs missing, or melted into a fine buttery substance at once from the unprotected laser blast.The ship turned again. This time, to let me into the still open door. I ran up the stairs on the inside of the downward opening door very shakily.
Then something hit me in the leg. I couldn't tell you what it was. It could have been a laser, it could have been a rock, it could have been a knife, because I simply felt a burst of pain, and then a second, as I fell the several feet to the floor, knocking the wind out of me. My vision was blurred, and all I could see was the underside of the ship, and then simply the wall behind it. Looking up, I saw the open air, and the high class cities above our little place. After that, the business end of a laser rifle was pressed directly between my eyebrows.
? ? ?: "You are under arrest for treason against the rebellion."
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Post by wakemeup on May 18, 2014 5:49:28 GMT
That went to shit quickly.
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Post by Deleted on May 18, 2014 5:55:08 GMT
Yes it did.
In other news, I just fixed some error's in Mikey's log. You may want to re-read the first part of the written log.
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Post by wakemeup on May 18, 2014 6:05:44 GMT
So, the team flies on Kestrel. Nothing surprising. I would expect Dome to be the captain, but Michael works too, I guess. The lack of me would worry me, but you said I will be in it, so I just hope for a badass introduction. I hope I won't be a rebel.
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Post by Deleted on May 18, 2014 6:14:52 GMT
That almost makes me want to put you on the rebel side.
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