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FUBAR
Apr 2, 2014 0:53:13 GMT
Post by Bioshock Infinite WD on Apr 2, 2014 0:53:13 GMT
Well keep at it my friend.
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FUBAR
Apr 2, 2014 20:24:04 GMT
Post by Rock114 on Apr 2, 2014 20:24:04 GMT
Is there anything I could improve for my future projects? Anything at all, guys? Every little bit helps me improve.
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FUBAR
Apr 2, 2014 20:25:09 GMT
Post by Teacakes on Apr 2, 2014 20:25:09 GMT
*makes strange noise with lip* I don't think so. Not off the top of my head.
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FUBAR
Apr 2, 2014 20:32:36 GMT
Post by Rock114 on Apr 2, 2014 20:32:36 GMT
Well, damn. I knew I'd reach this point someday, but it turns out that being perfect is a lot less fulfilling than I thought it would be.
Arrogance aside, anything that anyone could think of would be great.
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FUBAR
Apr 2, 2014 20:50:41 GMT
Post by Teacakes on Apr 2, 2014 20:50:41 GMT
I can't think of anything
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FUBAR
Apr 2, 2014 20:58:57 GMT
Post by Rock114 on Apr 2, 2014 20:58:57 GMT
I think you meant to say anything, partner.
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FUBAR
Apr 2, 2014 21:03:37 GMT
Post by Teacakes on Apr 2, 2014 21:03:37 GMT
Oh shit.
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FUBAR
Apr 2, 2014 21:04:05 GMT
Post by Teacakes on Apr 2, 2014 21:04:05 GMT
I fixed it.
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Apr 12, 2014 4:32:00 GMT
Post by Deleted on Apr 12, 2014 4:32:00 GMT
did you upload this to fanfiction.net?if not,then I think someone put it there.if you did upload it there,well nevermind
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Apr 12, 2014 4:37:39 GMT
Post by Deleted on Apr 12, 2014 4:37:39 GMT
did you upload this to fanfiction.net?if not,then I think someone put it there.if you did upload it there,well nevermind nevermind,I saw the post on inferno
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May 19, 2014 18:17:22 GMT
Post by wakemeup on May 19, 2014 18:17:22 GMT
So, I have finally read this. Great job, Rock, I like the idea of focusing on military for once. Dorn and Keenan are goddamn heroes, they both died a badass death. I'll get to reading Inferno in a while.
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FUBAR
May 19, 2014 18:23:15 GMT
Post by Rock114 on May 19, 2014 18:23:15 GMT
So, I have finally read this. Great job, Rock, I like the idea of focusing on military for once. Dorn and Keenan are goddamn heroes, they both died a badass death. I'll get to reading Inferno in a while. I loved writing Keenan's death scene. It felt so right for him. I also loved writing for Kelley and Farley after they escaped Echo, given what happened between them. Also, fun fact: Originally, I was going to have Farley be wounded in the crash and shoot himself when he couldn't get free, leaving Conner completely alone before he met Beth at Atlanta. I decided to spare him though, as I liked the pragmatic, snarky personality I built for him.
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FUBAR
May 19, 2014 18:45:44 GMT
Post by wakemeup on May 19, 2014 18:45:44 GMT
I'm glad you spared Farley. I got a feeling he will cause a lot of problems, but his character is interesting. You could've spared Kelley too. I liked him :c Well, I liked Keenan too, buthe got a badass death scene, at least.
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FUBAR
May 19, 2014 18:51:11 GMT
Post by Rock114 on May 19, 2014 18:51:11 GMT
I'm glad you spared Farley. I got a feeling he will cause a lot of problems, but his character is interesting. You could've spared Kelley too. I liked him :c Well, I liked Keenan too, buthe got a badass death scene, at least. I couldn't have spared Kelley, he was dead from before the story started. The helicopter crashed into the Everett Drugstore, and Kelley is the zombie pilot from Episode 3 that Lee impales on the steel jutting out from the rubble.
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FUBAR
May 19, 2014 18:56:05 GMT
Post by wakemeup on May 19, 2014 18:56:05 GMT
I'm glad you spared Farley. I got a feeling he will cause a lot of problems, but his character is interesting. You could've spared Kelley too. I liked him :c Well, I liked Keenan too, buthe got a badass death scene, at least. I couldn't have spared Kelley, he was dead from before the story started. The helicopter crashed into the Everett Drugstore, and Kelley is the zombie pilot from Episode 3 that Lee impales on the steel jutting out from the rubble. I like all those small references, nice.
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