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Post by Deleted on Jan 15, 2014 7:03:29 GMT
First attempt at a video game music video, I know it was rushed and I could have done a few things much better. All criticism is welcome.
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Post by DomeWing333 on Jan 15, 2014 7:30:19 GMT
Okay, I liked the video and have two suggestions. One is to try to sequence some of your scenes so that they transition into each other a bit more logically. Individual scenes match the music quite well but the flow from one scene to another was weird at times. For instance, at about 1:09, you transition from the Grendel fight to Bigby having a smoke with Snow White and then back and it’s not clear why, making the scene with Snow seem a bit out of place. It would have been better to either stay with one scene or repeatedly switch between the two to establish a pattern.
Another thing is to try to make the intensity of your scenes crescendo with the song. Showing Bigby beating up Woody doesn't quite have the same punch after seeing him rip Grendel’s arm off, for instance. You want the Bigby to get more and more badass as the song goes on.
That’s pretty much it. Good job and keep at it.
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Post by Autobot Sonic on Jan 15, 2014 16:44:09 GMT
Being a big fan of the song when it was in Borderlands 2, it seemed like a cool video at first, and it was! While it you were able to make the video work with video cuts to match the tone of the song, I would suggest incorporating fades, specifically at during slower parts of songs, and maybe include some voice clips during instrumental parts. Pluse take some of Dome's suggestions as well. Overall though it was a good first music video. keep up the good work man!
8.5/10
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