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Mercy
Jan 8, 2014 21:54:34 GMT
Post by Bioshock Infinite WD on Jan 8, 2014 21:54:34 GMT
Holy shit, now that is bleak as hell, good work channeling the spirit of the comics TKA.
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Mercy
Jan 8, 2014 21:56:52 GMT
Post by Teacakes on Jan 8, 2014 21:56:52 GMT
Thanks Bio.
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Mercy
Jan 9, 2014 0:30:12 GMT
Post by Pimp-Hand Lee on Jan 9, 2014 0:30:12 GMT
Wasn't expecting you to have the cajones to do that tka. I'm not sure going to a hospital to have the baby was a rational idea but it made for a good ending.
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Mercy
Jan 9, 2014 7:29:08 GMT
Post by Teacakes on Jan 9, 2014 7:29:08 GMT
Thanks Dildor.
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Mercy
Jan 9, 2014 8:06:16 GMT
Post by Teacakes on Jan 9, 2014 8:06:16 GMT
By the way, before I put this on fanfiction.net does anyone have any recommendations? Do you want events changed or things added, I don't know like more character development for Ralph.
Whatever you want, just say the word.
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Mercy
Jan 9, 2014 9:21:21 GMT
Post by Pimp-Hand Lee on Jan 9, 2014 9:21:21 GMT
Ralph feels a little too convenient throughout, changing that or giving him more backstory would help.
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Mercy
Jan 9, 2014 11:18:29 GMT
Post by Michael7123 on Jan 9, 2014 11:18:29 GMT
Maybe have him not get bitten, so he might survive.
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Mercy
Jan 9, 2014 15:11:02 GMT
Post by Autobot Sonic on Jan 9, 2014 15:11:02 GMT
Maybe have him not get bitten, so he might survive. It's the end of the fanfic though, so unless he decides to make a second one, we'll never know....
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Mercy
Jan 9, 2014 19:09:43 GMT
Post by Teacakes on Jan 9, 2014 19:09:43 GMT
Keep your eyes on fanfiction.net in the next couple of hours, 'kay
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Mercy
Jan 9, 2014 21:26:38 GMT
Post by Teacakes on Jan 9, 2014 21:26:38 GMT
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Mercy
Jan 24, 2014 17:04:49 GMT
Post by Teacakes on Jan 24, 2014 17:04:49 GMT
.... You think I should do a second one?
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