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Post by Teacakes on Jun 2, 2015 17:30:11 GMT
Fucking love this chapter.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 2, 2015 17:37:01 GMT
And only now do I realise Rock has a fic by the same name.
Fuck.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 2, 2015 21:10:10 GMT
I'm so happy right now. Why does Hector lie about the exact location? I mean, he's been set up as someone who's only goal is to keep himself alive... there's a small chance that Silas could have known he was lying, so why would someone like Hector risk it?
Regardless, I can't say anything bad about this chapter because one, it was just really great, even setting aside my bias, and two, I'm biased and Hector is my favorite character.
One thing... Hector turned a corner in a forest? That one phrase was weird.
Also, explaining how Silas got his scar was cool.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 2, 2015 21:19:22 GMT
I'm so happy right now. Why does Hector lie about the exact location? I mean, he's been set up as someone who's only goal is to keep himself alive... there's a small chance that Silas could have known he was lying, so why would someone like Hector risk it? Just in case he planned on going there at some point. He likes keeping his options open. He didn't think about it properly because he was panicked. Regardless, I can't say anything bad about this chapter because one, it was just really great, even setting aside my bias, and two, I'm biased and Hector is my favorite character.
One thing... Hector turned a corner in a forest? That one phrase was weird. Hmm, I guess so. It was meant to be read as he was running straight ahead and turned in another direction. Also, explaining how Silas got his scar was cool. Thought I ought to considering people were wondering about it.
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Post by Teacakes on Jun 2, 2015 21:21:20 GMT
I am completely biased towards Hecfor too. He's my fav <3
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Post by Deleted on Jun 2, 2015 21:45:32 GMT
Gonna be honest, I used to like him but I don't any more.
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Post by Teacakes on Jun 2, 2015 22:29:38 GMT
Blasphemy!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 2, 2015 22:34:15 GMT
Blasphemy! Considering I'm the writer, it's the opposite; word of God.
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Post by Teacakes on Jun 2, 2015 22:36:36 GMT
'Twas a joke, my dear compadre
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Post by Deleted on Jun 2, 2015 22:38:03 GMT
'Twas a joke, my dear compadre same here, text just doesn't translate context very well
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Post by Teacakes on Jun 2, 2015 22:42:07 GMT
Indeed
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Post by Deleted on Jun 2, 2015 22:42:20 GMT
Quite
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Post by Teacakes on Jun 2, 2015 22:43:14 GMT
Precisely
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Post by sos on Jun 3, 2015 5:30:07 GMT
I love scar origin stories and I chuckled at Hector's throwaway thought line of Annie being careless with how she covered her tracks. Noooo, an 8 year old being careless??? Never!
But, yeah, I didn't dislike the chapter per se... it's just that Silas most definitely would have murdered Hector. Probably tortured him beforehand. Hector was the man who took Sanctum down from the inside; the traitor. There is no Fall of Sanctum without Hector. Silas has grounds to hate Hector even more than Vince and company.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 3, 2015 10:39:04 GMT
I love scar origin stories and I chuckled at Hector's throwaway thought line of Annie being careless with how she covered her tracks. Noooo, an 8 year old being careless??? Never!
But, yeah, I didn't dislike the chapter per se... it's just that Silas most definitely would have murdered Hector. Probably tortured him beforehand. Hector was the man who took Sanctum down from the inside; the traitor. There is no Fall of Sanctum without Hector. Silas has grounds to hate Hector even more than Vince and company. To be fair, he thought he had broken both his legs, which to his mind, was more or less sentencing him to die slowly and be torn part by walkers.
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