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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2015 17:33:31 GMT
pls pls lord tom pls write some hot steamy sex scenes I think I said that when I posted that special TFTWL spinoff: Never. Ever. Again.
but it was so good
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Post by IDEK on May 25, 2015 17:34:37 GMT
okay, so...
I ended up writing a..form of chapter-y thing. not really sure how it is Since I was kind of put on the spot.
Either way, i'll just post it in a few minutes.
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2015 17:37:53 GMT
I think I said that when I posted that special TFTWL spinoff: Never. Ever. Again.
but it was so good I'm flattered. I truly am. But still no.
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Post by IDEK on May 25, 2015 17:42:42 GMT
COLLABORATIVE STORY OF UNTITLED EXISTANCE. EPISODE 1: The Making of Everything CHAPTER 1.
The world had changed over the years, No one really knew why. Approximately 5 months and 30 years ago, all leaders across the globe suddenly decided to combine their countries, No reason was actually given, and naturally; not many people were happy. Since various countries naturally had varying laws, there was no way this could possibly have been a good idea. Various people wanted their countries to return to separate slabs of rock. It just never happened, and nobody knew why.
Naturally, almost everything went to shit, and what resulted was a land that was nothing short of destructive and horrendous. Around the 5 year anniversary of this anarchic planet, several people cut themselves off from this naturally stupid idea and found themselves a new country to live in.
For some reason or another, the person who founded that land turned it into a empire. Noone seemed to fight against this idea either. But the resulting separate country was only slightly better than the anarchic cluster-fuck everything else had become.
August 19th, 25 years in, the Empire of Esperan
In a dark, hidden room; in this separate country, a group of 5 people, each of clearly different ages, where having a conversation while looking at something which resembled a mirror upon first inspection.
“..So, exactly How are we supposed to go about this?” The eldest of the five, a old lady wearing a japanese kimono asked, her voice bizarrely gruff.
“We’ve got the newest tech ever invented, and even some of these… more mysterious… Runic Artifacts in here. I think any way could potentially work.” Mused a middle aged man wearing a green sweater and sweat-pants.
“We need to know what we’re making first!”A Teenage girl with no hair at all pointed out.
“It’s a Universe! Right!”A Kid wearing a oversized shirt laughed, he was male, but sounded notably feminine.
“No, That’s impossible.”The old lady said.
“Then make something with bicycles in it, so everyone will know how to ride them.” The kid continued, the old lady just ignored him and continued herself.
“We already know what we’re making. I don’t know how people will react, but it just makes sense to create it.”
“But once again; the question you asked. How?”The girl shot back. “This technology isn’t inter-stellar.”
“Yet.”The middle aged man added.
“Yet.”She repeated “See the problem?”
“Shush both of you”Said a man who was currently looking over what looked like a scroll. “We don’t even know what we actually have here yet, it’s just not a good time to make any plans.”
The hidden room, was hidden behind a TV in a rather well-made house, which was overlooking a stream. On the other side of the stream, was a series of poorly made buildings. One of these looked like a mechanic shop. Judging by the big white words reading ‘Vehicle Repair Shop’, that’s exactly what It was.
On the top floor of that vehicle repair shop. Was a house, in this house, was a bedroom, In this bedroom, was someone currently lying in their bed
Ene was currently lying in his bed, His gold eyes staring at the rusty old ceiling. He wasn't entirely sure why. But, he kind of just wanted to. Nothing wrong with that, right?
He closed his eyes for a few seconds, and felt something spark inside his brain, and he heard something. It sounded like a thud.
Ene's eye's fluttered open instantly out of surprise, his face bore nothing other than mild confusion. Before he considered his current whereabouts and thought it rather normal.
He sat up and looked around the room he was in. It was rather bare for a bedroom, with only a rather tacky poster hanging on the other side of the bed.
“Ene! Hurry up and get down here!”His father yelled. Ene jolted slightly at the sudden noise, jumping off his bed and slowly walking out of his room.
The hallway of the house above the shop was almost equally bare, apart from a family portrait from ages ago, Showing Ene back when he was young, and his original mother.
Ene’s was a rather small kid for his age (17), and he was always not very well off, Not getting into any decent schools, not being able to find a good college anywhere near where he lived, and not even having a decent house. This was common for people in this ‘separate country’, but that just made it more of a major issue.
His hair was swept in almost every direction, and a rather dark almond colour. All he really had on him was a white short sleeved shirt and some black shorts.
“I told you to get down here!”His dad yelled at him again, He just rolled his eyes and walked down the stairs into the back of the vehicle repairs shop.
As opposed to the bare bones living quarters, the shop was filled to the brim with just about everything you’d expect. In front of Ene was the majority of the tools necessary in his dad’s career.
“So..Where is he?”A Reserved voice ene didn’t recognize asked from the front.
“He’s..Just taking his sweet time.”Ene’s Dad answered, sounding rather nervous.
Ene just put his hands in his pocket and opened the door to the front of the shop. Behind the front desk, he saw his Dad, who was currently standing in front of a lady with small eyes, in a black business suit.
“Ah, so, he’s your boy. Huh?”The lady asked.
“Yep. Ene Wilderhouse” Ene’s father grinned, bizarrely proudly. His father shared the same eye and skin colour as he did, but his hair was a flaming orange, and significantly shorter. The man was tall, stocky, but incapable of growing any facial hair. The lady he was talking to had a more, porcelean, skin tone, with lips so small he didn’t really look natural.
“…He looks cute, I guess.”The lady murmured, raising a eyebrow. “But not very impressive.” She continued, sounding more distasteful than anything. “Why do you think we’d want to take him in our new education program?” She asked.
Ene just looked at his father, having not heard about this before. He wasn’t complaining, but still mildly peeved that he was never told of this.
“Please, just, if he doesn’t get a good education. He’ll never be able to go anywhere in life. You’ve seen his previous grades.”
“…I’m still not sure if that’s what we’re looking for.”The lady commented. “I mean; All graduates will be going straight to the centre of the empire.”She said.
“Yes,yes, That’s why he needs to get in. Kid, don’t you want to serve the emperor.”Ene’s Dad asked rhetorically, to which Ene had no answer to, feeling a bit too confused to speak.
“I don’t think he knows what you’re on about.”The lady noticed.
“No, I really don’t.”Ene pointed out. His dad just looked at him with a look that screamed ‘‘Be quiet we’re talking’’
“…You should at least talk with your son before signing him up to something like this.”The lady said
“I- I- Did.”Ene’s dad muttered.
“No, you didn’t. I’ll be leaving now, and you better actually fill him in on this so he knows what you’re getting him into.”The lady commented, sounding slightly threatening as she took her leave.
“….What?”Ene asked, having no idea what he just walked into. “You, wanted to sign me up for some kind of elite education program, or something?”
“..Well…Y-Yes, I thought it’d help.”Ene’s Dad said.
“…You should’ve at least mentioned it.”
“Well, now I have. So I might as well ask this now; Do you want to go, or not?”
“…I still have no idea what you’re talking about.”Ene sighed. “Tell ya what, I’ll go get something from the shop for us, And when I’m back. We can talk all about this.”He suggested.
“..Okay, I’m kinda busy with work as it is.”
“Right.”Ene just nodded, taking some money out of the cash register before walking out of the house. END OF CHAPTER
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Yeah, this kind of just happened, not really sure how I feel about it. but it's good enough for a intro.
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Post by Hunter1324 on May 25, 2015 17:45:56 GMT
(Just in time for the TTIP)... Interesting choice, haven't figure yet much about what's goind on
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Post by IDEK on May 25, 2015 17:59:59 GMT
admittedly, this is kind of just something made up on the spot.
It'll probably get more fleshed out as it continues.
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Post by Deleted on May 26, 2015 21:55:41 GMT
...let's not forget this IDEK
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Post by IDEK on May 26, 2015 21:56:59 GMT
I haven't.
I've written a small bit, it's just not coming today, due to me not knowing how to bridge the gap between two scenes.
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Post by Deleted on May 26, 2015 22:25:26 GMT
Okay then.
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Post by IDEK on May 31, 2015 20:53:22 GMT
given that I have no idea what to do from this point.
I am giving the duty of chapter 2 too.. anyone who really wants it.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 22, 2015 9:27:37 GMT
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Post by IDEK on Jul 12, 2015 18:05:16 GMT
...
screw it, it would just be easier to do a rotation-every-chapter walking dead-esque story.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 15, 2015 5:40:48 GMT
you know, IDEK, if you cant continue, you can suggest someone else.
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Post by IDEK on Jul 15, 2015 14:28:49 GMT
I do remember saying.
''if anyone wants to do the next part, they can''
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Post by Deleted on Oct 3, 2017 7:04:37 GMT
part 2 when?
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