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Post by Deleted on Jan 31, 2015 18:26:09 GMT
I loved different POVs, they shake things up a bit. Don't levae us hanging, pepole!
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Post by IDEK on Feb 1, 2015 20:00:27 GMT
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Post by Deleted on Feb 1, 2015 20:27:03 GMT
Sorry for more delays, we're coming back soon.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 1, 2015 21:47:27 GMT
Sorry for more delays, we're coming back soon.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 1, 2015 21:49:06 GMT
Sorry for more delays, we're coming back soon.
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Post by wakemeup on Feb 1, 2015 21:49:39 GMT
Sorry for more delays, we're coming back soon.No, it's seriously around the corner. We're gonna work harder on the story from now on. Probably
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Post by Deleted on Feb 4, 2015 0:15:34 GMT
Day 30
"I still can't believe they're both just gone." Shepard ran his fingers through his hair.
"They might be alive..." Carlos rubbed his fingers along his stubble.
"Did you see that fucking wreck? No way is Harp alive, and we haven't seen Kat in almost a fucking month. Here I am, stuck with all her stoner friends. Fuck."
"Fuck you, dude."
"I-I didn't mean-"
"No, fuck you. You haven't hardly said a word this entire fucking time, and whenever you do, it's always a fucking complaint. I already have to deal with Dark Fox and DFH being in their fucking withdrawals, I don't need your bullshit."
Shepard's veins started to pop out of his red face, as he said, "Y'know what? FUCK YOU! You're the reason Kat and Harp are dead! YOU! You told Kat to go fuck herself, and get her own parents. If that didn't happen, she might be here right now!"
Carlos sat calmly, with mouth curved in a mean grimace, "Fucking adorable. Shit-stain thinks he has motherfucking balls. Get the fuck out of my face."
Suddenly, TKA came barreling through the halls. "Guys, calm down, some dude is claiming he's got Harp with him!"
Carlos' face smoothed out, "Where is he?"
"Front doors. Take this," TKA handed Carlos a sharpened toothbrush. "It's only just in case."
When Carlos got to the front doors, Rock was crouched over skin and bones. The ribs slowly lifted and fell. As he got closer, he saw scars running up and down the body's chest. The face, like the rest of him, was unhealthily skinny, but it was definitely Harp. Bandages were wrapped around his right shoulder, and red with blood. Only then did Carlos realize Rock was holding a rifle.
"Where the fuck did you get that?"
"Harp's 'friend' walked in, asked if I was Rock, and shoved the rifle into my gut."
"Why the fuck would he do that?"
"It's my dad's rifle. Look at the blood on the barrel. You'd best believe I got some questions."
"Where is he now?"
"Dfh and Dark locked him in the Physics room. They're trying to get a story out of him."
"You let those two with him alone? The fuck were you thinking?"
Suddenly, the big man on the floor coughed.
"Harp?" Rock shouted, "Harp, is this my dad's blood? Where the fuck is Michael?"
"You call your dad Michael?" Harp whispered.
"Is it my dad's blood?"
"No," Harp wheezed.
"Is he alive?"
Silence.
"I don't know. It's a long story."
"Rock," Carlos intervened, "Go make sure those dumbasses don't hurt our guest. Harp, tell me EVERYTHING."
Harp wheezed, and awkwardly looked off to the left. "My mom was shot. We were just finishing packing clothes and blankets into the car, when some bandit wannabe showed up..."
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Post by Deleted on Feb 4, 2015 17:51:35 GMT
Are me and Shepard brothers in this? I can't remember.
but noice verbal fight
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Post by Deleted on Feb 17, 2015 20:51:29 GMT
Are me and Shepard brothers in this? I can't remember. but noice verbal fight No you're not. Also, sorry for not posting anything in these past weeks. We've been working out this next section. We also have come up with a new writing process, as our last one simply was not working. Our parts were less exciting than we wanted them to be, but things have definitely improved. Our new part will be coming soon.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 17, 2015 23:00:21 GMT
24 days earlier.
Softly, Mike shut the door to Rock’s room behind him.
“How’s she doing?” Harp sat crosslegged in the hall.
Mike froze for a second, “Harp, come. we need to talk.”
“She’s doing alright, right?”
Mike opened his mouth to speak, but instead, motioned for Harp to follow him, as he walked around the corner, into the living room. Mike sat on the couch, and patted the cushion next to him. Harp sat, and Mike began to speak. “Harp, look. Vis isn’t doing that great. Her wound is infected. I’ve done all I can, but without medical attention…” Mike’s eyes drifted to the floor, “Harp, I’m no doctor, but I don’t think she’s gonna last long.”
Harp closed his eyes, and rested his forehead in his hands, “There’s gotta be something we can do…”
“You saw the Portland hospital, Harp. It was a God forsaken mess.”
Harp’s cheeks turned red, and his forehead wrinkled as he said, “Well what about Wilsonville? We just have to get on highway 5 and head south. It should be clear. Everyone would’ve been heading to the woods, right? That’s the smart thing to do. Maybe a few people would’ve been looking for family, but everyone else would’ve been wanting safety. The highway should be completely open.”
A short silent moment followed.
“You’ve been thinking about this.” Mike said quietly.
“It’s all I do lately. My dad’s been dead for so long, and he was… Y’know… Fucked up... But I still can’t forget how it felt. The pain in my chest felt like… I couldn’t even describe it. Now my brother’s missing, and my mom is dying, too. I can’t fucking take it, Mike.” Tears streamed down Harp’s face.
“I know how it feels, Harp. You might not believe me, but I do.”
“How?”
“My father was bitten by a rabid raccoon. I was.... Thirteen, fourteen, so we must’ve been living in Iowa. Our car broke down, and it was miles and miles to the nearest town. I watched as all that made him him washed away. The once strict man didn’t mind when I broke a framed picture. The once religious man didn’t mind when I... Said some terrible things… That man was my hero. And he faded away. As horrible as this sounds, you can’t forget about the people that rely on you through all of this. It’s gonna be hard, but you’re gonna have to move on.”
“Who the fuck relies on me?”
“Your brother. I remember talking to him some, and he loves you, Harp. If he’s out there, and still kicking, he needs you to be alright. I know it. Now look, I’m just saying this in case things don’t work out. We’ll head down to Wilsonville. We’ll bring your mother. But first, I’m gonna teach you how to shoot a gun. Ok?”
“Ok. Yeah. That… Yeah.” Harp sniffed, and wiped his eyes.
“Now this is a semi automatic rifle, meaning you pull the trigger once, you shoot once. And this scope, this is a family heirloom. My dad got it from his dad, who got it from his and so forth up until the civil war. You can adjust the lens with this lever here…”
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Post by thatstoo2019man on Feb 19, 2015 20:24:44 GMT
needs more crackman
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Post by thatstoo2019man on Mar 8, 2015 18:17:12 GMT
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Post by Deleted on Mar 8, 2015 18:47:33 GMT
Yeah, well... The interest doesn't seem to be there. Aside from this comment, and Carlos, we don't even have any indication of if anybody cares.
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Post by thatstoo2019man on Mar 8, 2015 19:00:17 GMT
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Post by IDEK on Mar 8, 2015 19:03:20 GMT
oh,
Hi.
Yeah, I am reading this by the way, it just weaselled it's way out of my participated.
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