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Post by Deleted on Dec 3, 2014 23:06:27 GMT
Here's that spreadsheet you asked for, Teacakes A bit messy, but it's all there: Nice. Vince had the most, then. Yep. Odd considering he wasn't really a focus for quite a lot of the season, more just acting as the group's backbone. This Season had a lot of focus on the new group and Annie. Just felt natural.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 4, 2014 0:35:53 GMT
Trivia round 4: - Becca was originally going to lose a kidney to Sanctum. Thought that was a bit too much so I just made it a blood sample with the threat of something further happening in future if they didn't escape.
- There was going to be a Sanctum Guard called Jeff. I don't know what happened to him.
- Stan was going to be alive, missing his legs. He would remain behind when the group escaped so as not to slow them down. If he was going to die anyway there was no point in him being there to begin with, so I just had him die in surgery.
- Phil was originally going to be a prisoner instead of a guard. I think he was going to be related to Tessa, but I don't know. He was just going to end up being another canon-fodder member of the group with no development so I made him a guard instead, though he was a complete flake.
- Mitchell and Kiff were originally going to die in Episode 4, though their deaths were put back and moved forward respectively.
- An extremely early idea had Mitchell committing suicide after his guilt surrounding his younger sister's death finally got to him. I decided that it was too out-of-character and he wouldn't be able to follow through with it. This was before I decided that Fuad would kill himself.
- Similarly, after their losses, Sully and Em would have formed a suicide pact and attempted to shoot themselves simultaneously. Vince or Wyatt would've intervened and saved them.
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Post by Autobot Sonic on Dec 4, 2014 1:33:05 GMT
Trivia round 4: - Becca was originally going to lose a kidney to Sanctum. Thought that was a bit too much so I just made it a blood sample with the threat of something further happening in future if they didn't escape.
- There was going to be a Sanctum Guard called Jeff. I don't know what happened to him.
- Stan was going to be alive, missing his legs. He would remain behind when the group escaped so as not to slow them down. If he was going to die anyway there was no point in him being there to begin with, so I just had him die in surgery.
- Phil was originally going to be a prisoner instead of a guard. I think he was going to be related to Tessa, but I don't know. He was just going to end up being another canon-fodder member of the group with no development so I made him a guard instead, though he was a complete flake.
- Mitchell and Kiff were originally going to die in Episode 4, though their deaths were put back and moved forward respectively.
- An extremely early idea had Mitchell committing suicide after his guilt surrounding his younger sister's death finally got to him. I decided that it was too out-of-character and he wouldn't be able to follow through with it. This was before I decided that Fuad would kill himself.
- Similarly, after their losses, Sully and Em would have formed a suicide pact and attempted to shoot themselves simultaneously. Vince or Wyatt would've intervened and saved them.
The suicide pact would've been an interesting idea.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 4, 2014 1:44:59 GMT
Trivia round 4: - Becca was originally going to lose a kidney to Sanctum. Thought that was a bit too much so I just made it a blood sample with the threat of something further happening in future if they didn't escape.
- There was going to be a Sanctum Guard called Jeff. I don't know what happened to him.
- Stan was going to be alive, missing his legs. He would remain behind when the group escaped so as not to slow them down. If he was going to die anyway there was no point in him being there to begin with, so I just had him die in surgery.
- Phil was originally going to be a prisoner instead of a guard. I think he was going to be related to Tessa, but I don't know. He was just going to end up being another canon-fodder member of the group with no development so I made him a guard instead, though he was a complete flake.
- Mitchell and Kiff were originally going to die in Episode 4, though their deaths were put back and moved forward respectively.
- An extremely early idea had Mitchell committing suicide after his guilt surrounding his younger sister's death finally got to him. I decided that it was too out-of-character and he wouldn't be able to follow through with it. This was before I decided that Fuad would kill himself.
- Similarly, after their losses, Sully and Em would have formed a suicide pact and attempted to shoot themselves simultaneously. Vince or Wyatt would've intervened and saved them.
The suicide pact would've been an interesting idea. There wasn't really a place I could've put it though. I don't think Sully was the kind of person to give his life up unless he was saving someone by doing it.
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Post by Rock114 on Dec 4, 2014 2:13:17 GMT
I just realized that all of my favorite characters in this story are dead.
Why does that always happen?
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Post by Deleted on Dec 4, 2014 2:19:14 GMT
I just realized that all of my favorite characters in this story are dead. Why does that always happen? Still got Vince and Annie! Go fuck yourself, Bonnie.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 4, 2014 2:22:36 GMT
I just realized that all of my favorite characters in this story are dead. Why does that always happen? Everyone you love is dead. It's painful for me to. Characters like Sully and Em are ingrained deep in my head and it's hard to let them go. Had to do it though, couldn't leave one without the other and not everyone was making it out of that fight.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 4, 2014 2:26:03 GMT
I just realized that all of my favorite characters in this story are dead. Why does that always happen? Everyone you love is dead. It's painful for me to. Characters like Sully and Em are ingrained deep in my head and it's hard to let them go. Had to do it though, couldn't leave one without the other and not everyone was making it out of that fight. Sully and Em confirmed dead?
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Post by Rock114 on Dec 4, 2014 2:26:24 GMT
I just realized that all of my favorite characters in this story are dead. Why does that always happen? Everyone you love is dead. It's painful for me to. Characters like Sully and Em are ingrained deep in my head and it's hard to let them go. Had to do it though, couldn't leave one without the other and not everyone was making it out of that fight. Even the characters I love in my own stories end up dead for some reason. I think the Grim Reaper of Fiction has something against me. I'm still not even over Hank from Breaking Bad. His death messed me up for a good week after I watched it. And now this.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 4, 2014 3:26:57 GMT
Everyone you love is dead. It's painful for me to. Characters like Sully and Em are ingrained deep in my head and it's hard to let them go. Had to do it though, couldn't leave one without the other and not everyone was making it out of that fight. Even the characters I love in my own stories end up dead for some reason. I think the Grim Reaper of Fiction has something against me. I'm still not even over Hank from Breaking Bad. His death messed me up for a good week after I watched it. And now this. You're not alone with the Hank death scene. I fucking bawled my eyes out.
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Post by Rock114 on Dec 4, 2014 4:08:02 GMT
Even the characters I love in my own stories end up dead for some reason. I think the Grim Reaper of Fiction has something against me. I'm still not even over Hank from Breaking Bad. His death messed me up for a good week after I watched it. And now this. You're not alone with the Hank death scene. I fucking bawled my eyes out. I didn't even cry when he died. I just stared in shock. I started crying and bawling a few days later after I watched a tribute to him on Youtube. It fucked me up big time.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 4, 2014 13:34:44 GMT
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Post by wakemeup on Dec 4, 2014 14:18:10 GMT
Fuck, I've just realised Silas is still probably alive. So is Bonnie. Why you gotta do this, Jayko?
And except for Hector, all my favourites are dead. I know what you feel, Rock.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 4, 2014 14:21:38 GMT
Fuck, I've just realised Silas is still probably alive. So is Bonnie. Why you gotta do this, Jayko? And except for Hector, all my favourites are dead. I know what you feel, Rock. Perhaps Sonja's alive too, though I wouldn't count on it judging by how she fled in the direction of the herd. Phil's more likely to be alive; if I've learned one thing over these two seasons, it's that Vince is merciful of black dudes who regret their role in the preceding events.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 4, 2014 18:46:50 GMT
I'm torn. I have three options:
- Write refined and altered book version of ITF1 and see if maybe I can get it published. - Do nothing - Consider the possibility of ITF3.
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