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Post by Master Psychic on Dec 29, 2013 16:32:05 GMT
Cute. Clementine is much nicer with Sarah in this fan fic then she was in the game.
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Post by Teacakes on Dec 29, 2013 16:34:21 GMT
Yeah. Since everyone believed her about the bite, she didn't have to sneak around the cabin, meaning people trusted her more, were kind to her and treated her differently meaning all those events helped her and Sarah get along much better as Clementine doesn't have to hold much against Sarah's father.
All of this happens because of one simple dog.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 29, 2013 17:21:57 GMT
nice story,but 1 minor problem.the dog sam was stabbed in the leg AND the chest,like a lung or something.unless this is an AU where there is only 1 spike instead of 2,nonna this would happen.
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Post by Teacakes on Dec 29, 2013 17:50:46 GMT
Dawn was breaking as Pete, Nick and Clementine exited the cabin. The orange golden glow touched the tree tops causing them to catch a blaze in the beaming sunlight.
"How about you go get Sam, me and Nick will wait for you, since Nick needs to do his business" Pete said with a small chuckle, Nick glared at him crossly.
"Ok" Clementine replied, and wandered over to the shed. There was silence inside, she listened closely for any sound or trace of Sam. She undid the bolt and threw open the doors. Sam burst out into the open air and jumped up at her, knocking Clementine to the ground. She laughed as Sam began to lick her excitedly, he was so glad to see her familiar face.
"Hey boy" she greeted, ruffling up his fur. Sam got off her, allowing Clementine to stand up "Me, Pete and Nick are going down to the river to catch some fish, would you like to come?" She asked, and Sam answered with a bark. She stroked his head, letting out a small giggle "I'll take that as a yes then".
She patted her knees "Come on boy, lets go, there waiting for us". Sam woofed and came to her side, following her over to Pete, who was standing by a forest trail.
"Where's Nick?" She asked as they joined him.
"Ah like I said, he's gone to do his business" he replied.
"Business?" Clementine questioned, confused by his remark.
".... He's gone to piss on a tree"
"Oh ok"
"Come on Clem, lets head down to the river" Pete told her, as he began to trudge along the forest trail. Clementine and Sam followed close behind.
"What about Nick?" She asked.
"Ah he'll be find, the boy knows where the river is, he can catch up to us"
Pete walked on ahead, carrying his rifle and going at a steady pace as the path turned into a slope. Clementine clutched her bandaged arm tightly, while Sam wandered round, straying from the path every so often and sniffing round trees, taking in the new smells.
"How ya' holding up? I heard you got an earful from Rebecca last night. Once she gets going there's no bringing her back. Her barks worse than her bite"
"What's her problem?" She asked.
"Well, she's got a lot on her mind, lately. Bringing a baby into a world like this?" He replied, as the three of them walked over a door which had been place over a large ditch, it was being used as a bridge. Clementine picked up her pace and ran to Pete's side.
"How far are these fish traps?" Clementine asked as Sam also joined them, after exploring their surroundings more.
"It ain't much further" Pete told her.
Clementine gave Pete's rifle a hard stare which Pete picked up on. "Anyone teach you how to shoot?" He questioned. "By that I mean taught proper" he added. "Any idiot with a finger can shoot"
"My friend Lee taught me" she replied.
"That's good. It's important nowadays" he commented, steeping over a wired fence while Clementine and Sam proceeded to do the same.
"Nick was about your age first time I took him huntin'. Came across this beautiful 3 point buck just standin' there on the ridge line" he said, pausing from walking and Clementine stopped to listen, while Sam continued to sniff round at the brush as they talked.
"The boy takes the rifle... lines up the shot just like how I taught him... And then I hear him start whinin'. He turns to me and says 'I can't do it. I can't shoot it Uncle Pete. Please don't make me shoot it'" Pete said in a whining voice, imitating Nick in his younger days.
"Really? No way" Clementine responded.
"Hey!" A voice yelled. They both turned round to see Nick running towards them "Why didn't you wait for me?" He asked out of breath.
"You want us standin' around while you piss on a tree? You know where the river is, boy" Pete replied. "Anyway, I go to grab the gun out his hand before this big buck runs off when BANG! The gun fires. Boy nearly gut shot me. And of course the buck gets away."
"What're you goin' and tellin' her this shit for?" Nick interrupted.
"Cause you almost blew he face off yesterday. Seems relevant. Tryin' to let her know it's nothin' personal with you" Pete replied.
"Why are you always giving me a hard time?" Nick asked crossly.
""Because you're always givin' everyone else a hard time."
"I apologised already. She accepted."
"Ok, well I didn't know that."
"It's ok. He apologised." Clementine added.
"You're always trying to embarrass me" Nick said.
"You're doing a good enough job of that on your own" Pete argued.
Enraged, Nick pushed past Pete, knocking his shoulder purposely.
"Leavin' us again?"
"I know where the fucking river is!" Nick replied as he stormed off.
Pete watched him to before turning to Clementine "So anyway.... I found that buck later that season. Shot it right in the neck. Brought it up to my sister's figurin' she'd want to freeze some of the meat.... Nick didn't speak to me for weeks." He said, finishing off on his story of the old pre-apocalyptic days. "Sometimes you gotta play a role... Even if the people you love hate ya for it" Pete stated.
"He doesn't hate you" Clementine told him kindly.
"Nick's father wasn't there much, and he was a piece of shit when he was, so it fell to me to keep him in line. Raise him right. Meant I couldn't be just nice Uncle Pete." He said sadly.
"UNCLE PETE!" Nick yelled suddenly, Pete and Clementine were immediately on high alter and sprinted down towards the river, Sam following close behind.
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Post by Teacakes on Dec 29, 2013 17:52:13 GMT
nice story,but 1 minor problem.the dog sam was stabbed in the leg AND the chest,like a lung or something.unless this is an AU where there is only 1 spike instead of 2,nonna this would happen. It's pretty obvious deadwaste that it is hinted that Sam landed on only 1 spike. So don't judge my story, alright?! I have clearly said that, you should read it more carefully BEFORE you say stuff.
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Post by Teacakes on Dec 29, 2013 18:04:26 GMT
Anyway, update 2 posts above.
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Post by Teacakes on Dec 29, 2013 22:16:03 GMT
"Nick...?" Pete yelled in response as he caught sight of the awful scene. Bodies were scattered along the river bank, each one was full of bullet holes.
"Jesus, Mary and Joseph" Pete breathed in disbelief. Clementine scanned the area, while Sam sniffed one of the bodies.
Pete walked up to the body Sam was sniffing and tapped it with his rifle, trying to get a reaction. It wasn't getting up. "Fulla holes" he commented.
"Who do you think did this?" Clementine asked.
"Not sure yet. But it ain't your average gang'a thugs, that much I know" Pete replied.
"....Think about it. You're Carver, what do you do?" Nick questioned.
"Who's Carver?" Clementine asked.
Pete and Nick exchanged glances before Pete spoke up "Check those guys there" he told Nick, ignoring her question. "Be careful. Some of em' might still movin'" he told Nick cautiously.
Pete walked over, and knelt down by one of the bodies, studying it closely, while Nick went to the edge of the trees and examined another. Sam walked over to the edge of the river and stared longingly towards the small island across from them.
Clementine knelt by one of the bodies, which was wearing some sort of rock jacket "This ones shot too" she told Pete.
"Through the head?"
She quickly checked to see dry blood on the bodies face, once oozing from a large hole "Yeah..."
"Check the rest. And look for ammo while you're at it, we're runnin' low"
Clementine stood up and slowly joined Sam by the river bank and looked over at the bodies scattered on the sandbar. "There're are more out there!" She stated.
"This wasn't no rinky-dink pissin' match" Pete said.
"What was it then?" Nick asked.
"FUBAR" Pete replied simply as he stood up and moved towards the river.
"Where are you going?! We need to get the fuck outta here!" Nick demanded.
"Gotta check the rest" he told him.
"What?! Why?!" Nick yelled.
"Calm down and think about it son" Pete said as he began to wade out towards the sandbar.
"Calm down?! We gotta get out of here, now."
"Jesus Christ, kid, get ahold of yourself" Pete said, now standing on the sandbar.
"Shouldn't we go get the others?" Clementine asked.
"Wish we could, but one of these folks might still be alive, and just might be inclined to tell us who did this. We gotta do this now." Pete told them. "Stay here, keep searchin' these" Pete told Nick as Clementine jumped on a rock in the middle of the river and then leaped to the sandbar.
"This is a dumb idea" Nick said, backing away.
"You know Nick, I don't like this either, but sooner or later you're gonna to have to realise the simple truth"
"What? That you're an asshole?" He asked coldly, aiming his rifle at the surrounding area.
"That nobody in this world is going to give a goddamn if you like somethin' or not. You gotta grow up, son"
"Whatever" Nick responded, and wandered off.
Clementine looked over to Sam who was still on the other side of the bank and glancing round nervously, yearning to get to the sandbar but trembling in fear at the sight of the rushing water.
"Afraid of water huh Sam?" She asked, Sam whined in response.
"It's ok boy, it's not too deep don't worry, you'll be find I promise."
Sam looked at the river and then at Clementine and whimpered. "You can do it" she said gently.
Sam paused for a moment before bonding through the river, sending sprays of water into the air and soaking his own fur. He jumped up at Clementine and placed his paws on her hands and panted. Clementine held his paws tightly and smiled down at him. "You did it boy" she exclaimed, praising him. "Good job Sam" she said proudly.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 29, 2013 22:19:11 GMT
Oh... This is a fa-oh. I thought that this was discussing Sam...
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Post by Teacakes on Dec 29, 2013 22:31:01 GMT
If you have something insulting to say about my fic then don't say it.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 29, 2013 22:41:23 GMT
Oh... This is a fa-oh. I thought that this was discussing Sam... 1 up yours harpa,1 up yours*flips harp off*
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Post by Deleted on Dec 30, 2013 5:57:30 GMT
If you have something insulting to say about my fic then don't say it. This is a place to state our opinions, and I didn't even say SHIT about your stupid fucking fan fic. So save it next time, eh?
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Post by Bioshock Infinite WD on Dec 30, 2013 6:27:45 GMT
Sarcasm or not?
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Post by Deleted on Dec 30, 2013 6:32:10 GMT
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Post by Bioshock Infinite WD on Dec 30, 2013 6:35:55 GMT
Uhh... so that is a yes?
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Post by Deleted on Dec 30, 2013 6:37:07 GMT
No.
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