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Post by Deleted on Nov 22, 2014 1:41:23 GMT
Gonna make a chapter tomorrow. Gonna focus on the characters this chapter and then we'll get to the 'Junction City' storyline which is pretty much The Junction Map from NMRIH implemented in this story. Fucking sue me.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 22, 2014 2:28:58 GMT
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Post by Deleted on Nov 22, 2014 3:16:35 GMT
Thank you so much for the EXTREMELY detailed feedback. Thank you so much.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 22, 2014 14:19:40 GMT
Thank you so much for the EXTREMELY detailed feedback. Thank you so much.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 23, 2014 5:16:33 GMT
nvm tomorrow i'll make a new chapter
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Post by IDEK on Nov 23, 2014 9:41:33 GMT
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SOON.
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Post by wakemeup on Nov 30, 2014 19:07:45 GMT
you fuckin' cunt...
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Post by Deleted on Nov 30, 2014 20:13:31 GMT
This is kind of a filler chapter. This chapter features the group at Deadwaste's house.
TINYCARLOS PRESENTS IN ASSOCIATION WITH OTHERTWDFORUM
FORUMS USERS IN THE WALKING DEAD
EPISODE ONE: SITTING GRAVES
CHAPTER 5
DAY 16 OF THE APOCALYPSE 3:12 PM
Shepard sighed, and lit a cigarette and put it in his mouth. Carlos glared at him, "Where the hell did you get that?" Shepard raised his eyebrows, "Deadwaste. He must have stocked up when the world went to shit."
"Really? Huh. Never knew you smoked."
"I stole some cigarettes from my mom when I was fifteen. It was pretty good. I was a stupid kid, thinking that 'smoking' was cool. Now, I'm sounding like one of those anti-smoking commercials. You want one?"
"Never had one before."
"It's good."
"Fine. Give it here."
Shepard handed him a cigarette and then lit it. He coughed at impact. Shepard laughed, "Pussy."
"Shut up."
Inside the house, TKA and Nate were sitting at a table eating some breakfast.
"Thanks for the breakfast, Deadwaste." TKA nodded to him. Deadwaste clicked his tongue and then did a front flip, and ran towards the window, jumping out of it. Nate looked at how he did that, confused. He must have already broken the window because there was no glass when he jumped through it. TKA smiled, "He's awesome."
"He's strange." Nate commented.
"Yeah, that too. I asked him what 69 meant and well..... let's just leave it at that."
"Yeah, I can make my own assumption." Nate chuckled. TKA sighed, "Man, you think we can stay here?" Nate shrugged, "It's better than fucking around in the woods, that much I know for sure."
"I don't even know how to shoot."
"WHAT!? You said you did. Oh--So that's why you were missing like crazy!"
"Yeah. I've never shot a gun before. My dad used to go hunting with my uncle, they'd bring back deer, or some rabbits at time. But that was pretty much it. I asked to go with them, but they said it was too dangerous for me." TKA informed him.
"I knew someone who was killed in a hunting accident. He was stupid, chasing after a deer and then my other friend shot him in the back, and killed him. My friend was sent to prison. I don't even know where he is now."
"Dang. Sorry, dude."
"Don't worry about it."
PikaBlue and Blind Sniper were leaning against the wall, outside. They were still wearing the military uniforms they used to save Harp, Brotato, Shepard and Carlos.
"When are we gonna tell them?"
"Not just yet." Blind shook his head.
"GUYS! WE'VE GOT COMPANY!!" Carlos yelled.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 30, 2014 20:28:24 GMT
"Yeah, that too. I asked him what 69 meant and well..... let's just leave it at that." This sounds so real... (sorry TKA, that's true )
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Post by IDEK on Nov 30, 2014 21:37:34 GMT
huh, not much to say about this update.
just don't miss your deadline
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Post by Deleted on Nov 30, 2014 22:06:52 GMT
huh, not much to say about this update. just don't miss your deadline There's a deadline? And like I said, it's a filler chapter.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 2, 2014 4:10:48 GMT
Gonna start calling each chapter 'episode' now (not Telltale format kind of episodes) TINYCARLOS PRESENTS IN ASSOCIATION WITH OTHERTWDFORUM
FORUMS USERS IN THE WALKING DEAD
SEASON ONE
EPISODE 6
DAY 16 OF THE APOCALYPSE 3:20 PM
"Who the hell is this guy, Harp!?" Shepard questioned, pointing his rifle provided by Deadwaste at Rock and Dark Fox. Brotato growled, "Lay down the weapon, and you don't get harmed."
"I'm not pointing the gun at you, I'm pointing the gun at the two strangers you brought back!" Shepard retorted. Brotato cracked his knuckles and then Carlos rolled his eyes, "Okay... calm down, guys. Who are you? You two?"
"I'm Rock. And this is Dark Fox. We ran across your two friends while they were scavenging. We have a proposition for you." Rock explained. Carlos exchanged looks with Harp.
"Hear him out." Harp nodded. Carlos sighed, "So? What's your proposition?"
"I was thinking we could team up to go into Junction City. It's place where rescue is supposed to come. Harp and the taekwondo dude-"
"Mixed Martial Arts!" Brotato corrected. Rock sighed, "-told me that you had the numbers. It's only been me and my friend here, and the rescue is leaving soon. We've got to get into Junction City and get to the rescue. They've been stationed there since the beginning, they haven't been able to get deeper into the city. They're taking as many people as they can until the deadline, then they leave. What do you say? You look pretty well armed, we could use your help."
"We'd have to ask our host. We just got here two weeks ago and he provided us these weapons." Carlos told him. Rock nodded, "Do as you must."
Later that day, the group had decided that maybe Junction City was just a hoax, but it was something to fight for. Rock was sitting on a log, preparing to go to Junction City the following day. Carlos joined him, "You seem relatively calm. When all this happened, I was freaked out. Still am. You don't seem like it."
"It's something you grow up with, I suppose. Got a gun pointed at me when I was six years old. Had an abusive foster father who threatened to kill me. I wasn't smart enough to call the cops or anything, because I wasn't going to school."
"That's rough. Damn. So you aren't afraid of.... anything cause of that?"
"No. That's not exactly why. I mean, it's a part of it... but... I joined the Iowan Police Academy twelve years ago. Worked there for eleven years. Decided to take a break from the paperwork, the hot coffee and exercise in the morning. Heavy shit, you go through. Iowa doesn't really have that much crime, anyways."
"Man... your story sounds so much cooler than mine." Carlos scratched his head. Rock smirked, "And what is that?"
"Game developer." Carlos snickered. Rock smiled, "For who?"
"Telltale Games."
"You're fucking joking. Really? Goddamn. I can't believe I'm meeting a developer of Telltale Games! Eh. Doesn't really apply now, but still... I love Pete. He's the best character in Season 2 of the Walking Dead."
"Really? Huh. He's been a favorite of mine too."
"What are you two talking about?" Harp barged in. Rock raised his eyebrow, still unsure of this guy.
"You calling the shots to this Junction City thing?" Harp asked.
"No need. I just know the area, used to live there for three months." Rock said.
"Well, then you're gonna be calling the shots then." Harp told him. Rock shrugged, "I'm not gonna lie... it's gonna be tough. But the numbers you've got... I think we can pull it off. That leader of yours, what's his name, Naked Waste?"
"Deadwaste." Harp corrected. Rock nodded, "He's pretty stocked. He offered me and my friend about five helpings of food. Then he offered me a few of his porn magazines."
"Yeah, get used to that. He'll say that often." Shepard entered the conversation. Nate and TKA were sighing, laying against a car.
"You think we can trust them?" Nate asked. TKA shrugged, "They seem nice. They said rescue's at Junction City. I believe him." Nate shrugged, "I don't know, dude. How do we even know he's not leading us to somewhere else? His friend has been acting strange." He said, looking over to Dark Fox who was writing something on the wall.
"Want sum fuq?" Dark Fox muttered to Deadwaste. He was tapping his feet, as some sort of tap dancing. "YES. VERY MUCH SO."
"Fuck off, Mister."
"Him and Deadwaste will get along." TKA noted.
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Post by wakemeup on Dec 2, 2014 13:03:18 GMT
If you want to keep things close to the nmrih junction, at least half of the group will die. I can see Harp at the start of the junction chapter yelling "Guys! Drop all your weapons, and let's get to the rescue only with fisticuffs!" Then crackman will blow someone (likely me) up with the propane tank.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 2, 2014 23:51:57 GMT
If you want to keep things close to the nmrih junction, at least half of the group will die. I can see Harp at the start of the junction chapter yelling "Guys! Drop all your weapons, and let's get to the rescue only with fisticuffs!" Then crackman will blow someone (likely me) up with the propane tank. No, Carlos already told me what's going to happen to me. We came across a spanish speaker, and I was the only one that knew any sort of Spanish, so I was mainly the only one communicating with him. Then, towards the halfway mark of the map, Carlos and Rock started speaking really bad Spanish, and I said, "No, that's not how you say 'I' in Spanish. You say-" and then a runner came up and killed me with one swing.
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Post by Rock114 on Dec 3, 2014 0:32:32 GMT
Group's gonna get fucked in Junction City. Always does. I feel somewhat secure though, I've actually managed to survive that map a few times. inb4 Carlos has me trip over a dead body and accidentally shoot myself when I hit the ground.
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