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Post by Deleted on Jan 26, 2015 1:35:24 GMT
Hi.
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Post by Teacakes on Jan 26, 2015 7:16:08 GMT
Hello. Wait. You didn't use a period like you normally do. You didn't use a period. YOU DIDN'T USE A FUCKING PERIOD!
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Post by Deleted on Jan 26, 2015 16:13:24 GMT
Hello. Wait. You didn't use a period like you normally do. You didn't use a period. YOU DIDN'T USE A FUCKING PERIOD! Is... this a problem? I'm really not sure what to do anymore...
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Post by Teacakes on Jan 26, 2015 16:55:19 GMT
Hello. Wait. You didn't use a period like you normally do. You didn't use a period. YOU DIDN'T USE A FUCKING PERIOD! Is... this a problem? I'm really not sure what to do anymore... It's not a problem, I am just shocked. Seriously, dou, why did you say hi? Was it to point out that you still haven't read this?
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Post by Deleted on Jan 26, 2015 17:46:22 GMT
Is... this a problem? I'm really not sure what to do anymore... It's not a problem, I am just shocked. Seriously, dou, why did you say hi? Was it to point out that you still haven't read this? Bingo.
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Post by Teacakes on Jan 26, 2015 18:18:19 GMT
Gosh darn it, Zyphon
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Post by Teacakes on Jan 31, 2015 19:50:18 GMT
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Post by Teacakes on Feb 10, 2015 16:57:58 GMT
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Post by Hunter1324 on Feb 10, 2015 18:39:57 GMT
Half way through the second to last chapter and I'm like "Holly Shite!" Finished. Overall pretty good finale as mentioned I didn't expect things to get that dark. Pretty emotion bound too
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Post by Teacakes on Feb 10, 2015 18:43:38 GMT
Yep, I know. Gets pretty fucking dark in that one.
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Post by Teacakes on Feb 10, 2015 20:30:18 GMT
Half way through the second to last chapter and I'm like "Holly Shite!" Finished. Overall pretty good finale as mentioned I didn't expect things to get that dark. Pretty emotion bound too Thanks for the review. What were the fic's ups and downs? If you don't mind me asking. (Put it spoiler tags if it's spoilery)
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Post by Hunter1324 on Feb 10, 2015 21:25:37 GMT
Half way through the second to last chapter and I'm like "Holly Shite!" Finished. Overall pretty good finale as mentioned I didn't expect things to get that dark. Pretty emotion bound too Thanks for the review. What were the fic's ups and downs? If you don't mind me asking. (Put it spoiler tags if it's spoilery) Well the things that I was not particullary thrilled I guess were the "spoiler" during the episode's one "Next Time" and how Brooke kinda joined the group with a relatively weak motivation (yeah Nate and Catherine were nutjobs but she didn't know Clem and the others at all).
As for the good points I generally liked the character dynamic and they're personalities seem realistic, the overall flow of the story was pretty good and several parts of the plot were rather hard to predict.
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Post by Teacakes on Feb 10, 2015 21:43:44 GMT
Thanks for the review. What were the fic's ups and downs? If you don't mind me asking. (Put it spoiler tags if it's spoilery) Well the things that I was not particullary thrilled I guess were the "spoiler" during the episode's one "Next Time" and how Brooke kinda joined the group with a relatively weak motivation (yeah Nate and Catherine were nutjobs but she didn't know Clem and the others at all).
As for the good points I generally liked the character dynamic and they're personalities seem realistic, the overall flow of the story was pretty good and several parts of the plot were rather hard to predict. Yeah, sorry about the episode 1 thing. I had no control over that. Brooke eh... I had no control over that either. Episode 3 I hardly contributed to as I was taking a step back after episode 2.
You think so? The character's I mean. Personally, I think Michael's character (who was my OC) was handled poorly after episode 2. There's just something about him that went wrong, so he didn't exactly turn out to be what I intended him to be. What do you think?
Thanks for the other feedback though.
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Post by Teacakes on Feb 12, 2015 21:14:57 GMT
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Post by Teacakes on Feb 16, 2015 16:28:59 GMT
All links have been added to the OP for anyone who is behind or anyone who wants to read this season before they read season 4
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