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Post by visambros on Aug 17, 2014 0:55:11 GMT
Thank you so much for all your kind words and support guys. I feel alot better knowing that you all care.
Anyways, I'll try not to mention it much for now on. This thread will now mainly be about The Walking Dead: Real Monsters.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2014 1:04:49 GMT
I know somebody responded to me... Can't see any posts but mine. The other posts flash on screen for a second, and then disappear. The only one I was able tor read was Visambros thanking us for kind words. All I can say to that is you're fucking welcome, brah. You made the only fan fiction that hasn't made me puke in my mouth a little. Not to mention, you're a pretty cool person in general, in my experience of you.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2014 1:14:32 GMT
Thought I posted here already. Awesome fic, I love it.
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Post by visambros on Aug 17, 2014 1:30:46 GMT
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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2014 1:33:00 GMT
Well that's scary.
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Post by visambros on Aug 17, 2014 1:36:20 GMT
Well that's scary. I know. Nate's pimp game is too strong.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2014 1:40:09 GMT
Well that's scary. I know. Nate's pimp game is too strong. I didn't know Nate had jiggalos along with hoes.
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Post by visambros on Aug 17, 2014 1:42:26 GMT
I know. Nate's pimp game is too strong. I didn't know Nate had jiggalos along with hoes. Pfft
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Post by visambros on Aug 17, 2014 1:50:53 GMT
Okay, so for the next little while (not now, later) I'll be posting stuff from my website twdgrealmonsters. It'll mostly be about things I was planning on doing, music I think fits the feel of the plot, and stuff like that. It would be a good idea for you guys to reread this story if you only read the original version and not the revamped or PDF versions (you don't have to read both the revamp and PDF because they're almost 100% the same). I only suggest that because I'll be posting things that relate to the revamped version. Also the revamped version is just better written all around (and the ending of that version might change the way you view the fate of a certain character). So yeah, just a heads up.
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Post by visambros on Aug 17, 2014 1:52:53 GMT
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Post by visambros on Aug 17, 2014 19:14:40 GMT
Early Ideas #1There was originally going to be four people all together in Nate’s group instead of just three. I always knew there was going to be at least two people with Nate, but I originally added the third due to being inspired by “Ass Backwards” from Mindless Self Indulgence. Here are the main lyrics that made me think of adding a third person: Hello, Children. Would you like to hear a story? Well okay then. Let me tell you a story about One motherfucker, two motherfuckers, three motherfuckers, four motherfuckers. One motherfucker, two motherfuckers, three motherfuckers, they were born to roll. …don’t judge me. That song actually kind of sort of fits with the story. A little. Anyways, so after being inspired by that song, I decided to flesh out the third character a bit more. And the funny thing about that is at the time, this character was the most fleshed out- aside from Nate- than all the other characters I had planned up to that point. But she was the one I ended up getting rid of. I never named her, but she was going to represent the way Nate treats women (because before I added more depth to all my main characters, they started out as mirrors for Nate). She was going to be a year too young to be Nate’s love interest. An aspect of their relationship, therefore, was going to stem from the conflict of Nate being interested in her but understanding that she was too young (while almost being legal) and what he does with that. If anyone thinks that’s weird, I understand that, but that was kind of the point. Moving on. She was white with short blond hair. Her father was a scientist (in Washington or something) who she believed was trying to find a cure for the virus. It never crosses her mind that a cure might not be possible, or that her dad might be dead. It was going to be a reoccurring thing with her; talking about the dad that was going to find a cure and save the day. Eventually she was going to get bitten by a zombie a few days before the events of day 41. When this happens she was supposed to be separated by Nate in such a way where they would be able to talk to each other, but not be able to reach one another (In my mind they were separated by her being in a large hole and him being unable to get to her). She was going to be in extreme denial that she was going die. She tells Nate that she’s going to find her dad (even though he’s way to far away for her to reach him in time) and that her dad would cure her. Then she was going to walk away and you never see her again. I scrapped her character because when I was developing the others more, she didn’t fit into the story as good as Charlie and Vaughan did.
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Post by Teacakes on Aug 17, 2014 19:25:03 GMT
I prefer how the story turned out, just Nate, Vaughan and Charles Charlie.
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Post by visambros on Aug 17, 2014 19:27:20 GMT
I prefer how the story turned out, just Nate, Vaughan and Charles Charlie. Yeah me too. The extra girl only worked when I didn't actually have a concrete plot.
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Post by wakemeup on Aug 17, 2014 19:28:37 GMT
Yeah, I like it this way too. And wasn't there a girl too young for Nate, which he wanted to fuck in that camp? I already forgot a lot of the story, I need to read to new version.
And I've just reminded myself about the "Ask Vaughan and Charlie" thread on the old forum. We managed to get it to like 150 pages. Good times.
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Post by Teacakes on Aug 17, 2014 19:29:30 GMT
I miss that goddamn thread *sheds tear*
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