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Post by Teacakes on Aug 6, 2014 9:50:40 GMT
That better?
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Post by Teacakes on Aug 6, 2014 10:19:21 GMT
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Post by Master Psychic on Aug 6, 2014 10:24:25 GMT
Cool ending. Though, I'm not holding breath for a happy ending in the real No Going Back.
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Post by Teacakes on Aug 6, 2014 10:56:30 GMT
Final Status:
Clementine: Alive; Arrived at Wellington Luke; Alive; Arrived at Wellington Kenny: Dead; Shot himself after he was bitten Bonnie: Alive; Injured but made it to Wellington Mike: Dead; Put down by Bonnie before he could turn Rebecca's Baby: Alive; Arrvied at Wellington Christa: Alive; Found Clementine and the group and brought them to Wellington Arvo: Determinate; Either mercy killed or left to be eaten by walkers
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Post by Teacakes on Aug 6, 2014 14:11:27 GMT
Alternative choices Part 1Kenny turned away from Luke and stared at Arvo enraged "What do you have to say for yourself, shitbird?!" "Leave him, Kenny. He's not worth it!" Luke insisted. Arvo stuttered something in Russian. "Fucking speak English! I know you can understand me!" | Arvo answer him |
| Stop it, Kenny |
| Luke, just let him |
| ... |
"Luke, just let Kenny do this" Clementine insisted. "Arvo deserves it after what he did." She murmured darkly. They all noticed that"You know that's not right, Clem! You can't let Kenny do this, not again" Luke replied, the thought of Carver returning to the group. Kenny was about to butt in when the sounds of groaning interrupted him as a group of walkers emerged from the trees. "Shit! Must have been attracted by the gunshots" Kenny cursed. He glanced at Arvo, and his eyes darkened "You know what? Luke's right. Lets leave him. He can be walker food instead". Arvo's eyes widened with panic. "You heard me that time, didn't you?!" Kenny yelled at him. "What?! No! I didn't mean it like that!" Luke exclaimed "That's not right, Kenny" Arvo tugged at Clementine's sleeve and stuttered something in Russian. | Speak English |
| What is it? |
| I have to leave you |
| ... | "I have to leave you, Arvo. I can't do anything for you, now" she told him. "No! Please don't leave me from those things! Please!" He pleaded. "Come on, Clem. Let the walkers finish him off" Kenny told her. "This isn't right!" Luke cried. Clementine felt the cold metal glock press against her back as she glanced over her shoulder and at the approaching walkers that were beginning to close in. | Kill Arvo |
| Leave Arvo |Clementine straightening up and turned towards the group "Lets go" "We can't just leave him! Not like this!" Luke exclaimed. "You heard the girl, lets go" Kenny insisted. Luke scowled at Clementine and shook his head with disapproval before helping Bonnie walk on ahead. Kenny turned towards Clementine and gave her a brief nod "He'll get what he deserves". The one eyed man then followed Luke and Bonnie. Clementine went to do the same when Arvo grabbed her leg. "Please don't leave me! I don't want to be eaten!" He pleaded. | You deserve it | | I'm sorry | | Say nothing | Clementine stated at him silently, pulling away from his grip and then walking on ahead. "Clementine! Clementine!" He called after her, trying to crawl away from the approaching walkers. | Look back | | Keep walking | Clementine glanced over her shoulder and watched as a walker grabbed hold of wounded leg and sunk it's teeth into his flesh. Arvo screamed in agony as another walker chopped on his shoulder, while another tore open his stomach and removed all of his vital organs and proceeded to shovel each one into its mouth. Arvo continued to scream until one of them bit down on his neck and ripped his throat out.
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Post by Autobot Sonic on Aug 6, 2014 15:25:21 GMT
Oh boy, I'm not gonna imagine how hard it will be to write about leaving Kenny.
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Post by Teacakes on Aug 6, 2014 18:39:14 GMT
Hey guys, guess what... NO GOING BACK JUST BECAME MY MOST POPULAR FAN FIC!!!!!!
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Post by Teacakes on Aug 6, 2014 18:39:31 GMT
Reviews wise.
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Post by Teacakes on Aug 6, 2014 18:58:18 GMT
Yeah. Alternative choices.
Scenes alter, characters opinions on you change etc.
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Post by Teacakes on Aug 6, 2014 19:03:36 GMT
I'm sorry. I couldn't let Kenny live. That would be favouritism.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 6, 2014 19:24:36 GMT
Thank god for no Luke/Kenny choice, that's gonna be absolute shit if it's gonna be in the game
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Post by Teacakes on Aug 6, 2014 19:31:00 GMT
Will you let me live tho? No.
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Post by Teacakes on Aug 6, 2014 19:50:13 GMT
I'm not even going to ask.
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Post by Teacakes on Aug 26, 2014 19:05:39 GMT
Dawn was breaking, and the sunlight shining through the trees caused the blanket of snow to glisten. Luke was carrying Bonnie's AK-47 and leading the way, while everyone else lagged behind. Kenny slowed down and slumped beside a tree. Clementine paused and turned towards him "Are you okay, Kenny?" She asked as she walked up to him. "I think it's time" Kenny stated, avoiding her question as he removed his hand away from his neck. "Time? But you've still got some time left" Luke told him. "I'd rather end it now than later when I'll be too weak to do it myself." | You can't give up now | | One of us could end it later | | We understand | | ... | "It's okay Kenny, we understand. Just...." Clementine paused, her heart sinking like a stone within her chest "What do you need?" She asked. "I loaded gun would be nice" he replied. Luke took out pistol and handed it to Kenny "I got it off Rebecca's body... It was Carver's" "Huh, I guess Carver will be finishing me off after all" he said with a small chuckle "You go, I can do this alone." | I'm not leaving you | | Let us stay with you | | Okay, we'll go | | ... |
"If you want to do this alone then we'll do what you ask. We'll go" "Yeah, you do that. I don't really want you to see. I don't really want anyone to see" Luke sighed "Good luck... Old man" he said with a weak smile. For the first time, Luke and Kenny saw eye to eye. Luke held out his hand and Kenny shook it. Bonnie walked up to Kenny and allowed him to say goodbye to the baby "Sweet dreams, little one" he told the infant, adjusting the blanket that was wrapped around the child. Luke turned towards Clementine "Come on, Clem" | [Stay with Kenny] | | [Leave Kenny] |Clementine scrunched her eyes tightly shut and took a deep breath before exhaling deeply and opening her eyes "I'm coming" she replied sadly.
"Take care, sweetie" Kenny told her softly.
Clementine felt a sob caught in her throat, and almost choked upon her words. "I... I will" she stuttered. The two held eye contact for a brief moment. Clementine then ran up to him and through her arms around him. Kenny embraced her in a hug and patted her back as she sobbed.
They held the embrace for what seemed like forever. Clementine slowly pulled away and rubbed her eyes on her sleeve.
"Go on, now" he told her gently.
Clementine bit down on her lower lip and nodded silently. She turned and followed Bonnie and Luke along the path, leaving Kenny far behind. She just hoped that he ended it instead of letting himself turn.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 9, 2018 10:18:53 GMT
I'm sorry. I couldn't let Kenny live. That would be favouritism. let kenny die in peace
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