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Post by Deleted on Jun 6, 2015 18:19:22 GMT
Fun fact, actually. Freya was originally gonna be called Lily. In Ch41 (Silas's flashback) Silas was going to list all of the Sanctum members he'd lost, pausing on Lilly and thinking "as if that name didn't pain him enough already". But I changed the name to Freya as he'd totally name his daughter after the Norse Goddess of war and death (along with love & beauty but yk)
If you want we can call his wife Lily. I ain't bothered 'cause she's dead.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 6, 2015 18:24:21 GMT
idk if you guys guessed but every chapter is named after a human body part.
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Post by Hunter1324 on Jun 6, 2015 20:18:42 GMT
idk if you guys guessed but every chapter is named after a human body part. Well I tought that was a given
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Post by Deleted on Jun 7, 2015 16:59:31 GMT
Probably the best guy Freya could've hoped to come across.
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Post by Hunter1324 on Jun 7, 2015 17:05:21 GMT
Yet another thing that I tought was very likely to happen, seriously I swear I'm in a roll with this I think more than for being predictable (it could had been Hector, Russell ( I'm not denial!!!) or a complete stranger) it was mostly just the way the unknown man casually strolled into Freya's path, it just seem like something Bennett would do. "But they look more like prisions to him" So appropiate in this particular instance, only worse still... "The people from Sanctum looked like they could handle themselves, so everyone would hopefully be fine." Too much for the groups own good... Great Chapter!
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Post by Hunter1324 on Jun 7, 2015 17:26:35 GMT
On an unrelated note I love the way you had rearrenged the characters, it is easier to navigate, through.
Also nice extended backstory for the Church family, helps to put things on perspective...
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Post by Teacakes on Jun 7, 2015 19:51:10 GMT
Bennet has returned! Hooray!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 9, 2015 16:55:10 GMT
Ch30 was already called "Faces" but I ain't bothered.
POVs are starting to connect now. I'm still writing Ch8.
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Post by Hunter1324 on Jun 9, 2015 17:07:34 GMT
Heh... And to think that it was Hector's idea to burn Sanctum down Also I kinda liked the fact that they seemed familiar to each other without knowing why, after all they only met once and for a very brief time.
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Post by Teacakes on Jun 9, 2015 17:09:16 GMT
Hector has gone back to not saying much. I love it!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 9, 2015 17:10:36 GMT
Heh... And to think that it was Hector's idea to burn Sanctum down Also I kinda liked the fact that they seemed familiar to each other without knowing why, after all they only met once and for a very brief time. Hector was originally going to know exactly who Bennett was, but Bennett wouldn't recognise him. I changed it because they literally saw each other for about ten minutes, standing about ten metres apart.
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Post by Autobot Sonic on Jun 9, 2015 18:54:07 GMT
So will the next chapter focus on a new character, or are Hector, Sonja, Freya, and Bennett the only POV characters?
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Post by Hunter1324 on Jun 9, 2015 19:00:26 GMT
Sonja isn't a POV character No kidding, it's Sasha.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 9, 2015 19:14:04 GMT
So will the next chapter focus on a new character, or are Hector, Sonja, Freya, and Bennett the only POV characters? Freya, Hector, Sasha and Bennett are the only POV characters so far.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 9, 2015 20:38:02 GMT
One of the reviewers thinks that there's only 5 chapters left.
When in all honesty... I have no idea how long it could go.
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