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Post by Teacakes on Dec 23, 2013 17:50:25 GMT
Although adaption needs signing and documents and months of arrangements with social services.
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Post by Master Psychic on Dec 23, 2013 17:52:29 GMT
Although adaption needs signing and documents and months of arrangements with social services. Look, whenever I make mistakes point them out and I'll fix them.
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Post by Teacakes on Dec 23, 2013 17:54:49 GMT
Ok.
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Post by Teacakes on Dec 23, 2013 17:55:03 GMT
Good job MP.
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Post by Bioshock Infinite WD on Dec 23, 2013 18:07:58 GMT
Yes, I second that.
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Post by Master Psychic on Dec 23, 2013 19:44:34 GMT
Anyone else having some requests or suggestions or stuff?
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Post by Bioshock Infinite WD on Dec 23, 2013 19:45:19 GMT
Nothing I can think of.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 23, 2013 19:48:45 GMT
I still request the request I made a few pages ago.
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Post by wakemeup on Dec 23, 2013 19:55:59 GMT
I want Eddie and Wyatt to be in this.
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Post by Bioshock Infinite WD on Dec 23, 2013 20:33:11 GMT
Or Nate, you can never have enough Nate let me tell you.
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Post by Master Psychic on Dec 23, 2013 20:41:13 GMT
Or Nate, you can never have enough Nate let me tell you. Oh don't worry. Nate will have a role in this story.
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Post by Bioshock Infinite WD on Dec 23, 2013 20:54:37 GMT
YES!
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Post by Master Psychic on Dec 24, 2013 9:21:54 GMT
We see Lee knocking on the door and Doug opens it. Doug: Hello. I assume you're Lee. Lee: Yeah, I'm Lee. Doug: So, what brings you here? Lee: Well, I want to talk to you about Carley. Doug: What about her? Lee: Well you see, there is something odd about her. Doug: Why do you think so? Lee: I don't know. I feel like she is hiding something from me. Kenny told me that something happened last year that made her so secretive. Doug: Ah... I know what happened. Lee: Ok, so what happened? Doug: Well, last year Carley had a boyfriend, his name is James Camp. Both of them were very happy and I even heard that James would marry her but... Luciel ruined everything. Lee: How? Doug: When Carley was going to WABE, Luciel called James and told him to go to her house. When James arrived at Luciel's house, she immediately kissed James and both of them... Well... Lee: I think I know what you are trying to say. Doug: Yeah. And the worst part is that Carley din't knew. And after that, James started to ignore Carley and paid more attention to Luciel and one day, he told Carley that he doesn't love her anymore and he broke up with her. Lee: Jesus... Doug: I know. Carley was very upset about this and she even tried to commit suicide but I stopped her, telling her that James doesn't deserve her. Of course, the neighbours got angry about this and demanded Luciel to get out of the neighbourhood and she did so. Lee: Poor Carley... Doug: Yeah. I don't know if she will be able to love someone ever again after what happened. Lee: Well, I have to go. Thank for telling me. Doug: No problem, Lee. Hope you have a good time here. Lee: Thanks. Lee gets out of Doug's house. He gets his cellphone and he calls... Lee: Hello Social Services. My name is Lee Everett and I... Lee tells the Social Services about Clementine and says that he wants to adopt her. Of course, he and Clementine go to Social Services and after some signing and documents, Clementine is now an Everett. We see Lee and Clementine in the car and going back to the neighbourhood. Lee: Well Clementine. Now you are officially Everett. Clementine: And what does this mean? Lee: It means that you are officially my daughter now. Clementine: Really? Lee: Yes. Clementine: Ok. Lee, can I call you daddy? Lee: Sure honey. Clementine: Ok, dad. Lee smiles at Clementine and they arrive back at the neighbourhood. Maybe moving here wasn't such a bad idea and... Carley: WHY THE FUCK DID YOU TELL HIM THAT?! Lee looks and sees Carley yelling at Doug. Doug: I'm sorry, I thought that maybe he should know and- Carley: YEAH, TELL HIM THAT MY EX-BOYFRIEND DUMPED FOR A MOTHERFUCKING WHORE AND THAT I TRIED TO COMMIT SUICIDE! GREAT FUCKING JOB DOUG! Doug: I'm sorry. Look Carley, not all men are like James. Carley: Yeah, right! Doug: No, I'm serious. Maybe you should give men a second chance. What happened with James was Luciel's fault, not his. But now she is gone, she won't be able to make everybody's lives a living Hell. I heard that Lee is single and maybe- Carley: No! I don't want to do this. If I do this then, it will happen again and I... Doug: Carley... Carley: Forget this. Carley walks away and goes back in her house and Doug sighs. Lee: Christ...
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Post by IDEK on Dec 24, 2013 9:24:22 GMT
a reasonable freakout. Poor Carley Is Luciel more of a bitch when the Apocalypse actually didn't happen?
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Post by Teacakes on Dec 24, 2013 9:24:23 GMT
I think Doug should have been a little more hesitant about telling Lee Carley's secret.
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